|Reviews for What He Doesn't See|
| Dyadra chapter 1 . 3/7
You're story is super cool
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Kills me every time someone writes a nice perspective on the beach scene. Knowing what happens afterwards.
Well done at your attempt on Finny's POV.
| Madame Penguin chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
It's because he thinks you're lying to him...or would this be more like he's attracted to you but he's denying it like everyone else thought when reading the book?
I always love reading through Finny's point of view though and you did pretty well. Good luck on future chapters/stories!