Reviews for What Stood Between Them
Duffy1972 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
"Creamy soft globes?"

Women wear perfume. Men wear cologne.

"That had burned like a poker, but her heart had already been aching when she had told him she loved him and his silence and his hand touching her face had been her answer." - yes. that had to hurt like the dickens.

So baseball and wings, huh? Planning on finishing this one? ; )
acclutch94 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
I really hope you are going to add more chapters...loving it!