|Reviews for Curing Homesickness|
| Flame.of.Ishval chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I liked it - nice little snapshot of something happening around camp.
Two thoughts - After the line "Gutterman huffed," it's confusing as to who is talking. You've set it up as Jim responding to Pappy, but then the sentence should start with, "Greg," and not "Jim,". The other thing is at the very end where you write "some days it didn't pay to join the Navy." They're not in the Navy, they're in the Marines. :) And as any Marine will tell you, those are very different things.
| jodm chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Goood ficlet! You got the characters just right, even Meatball! (Who is almost as smart as Toby Cockatoo over at Hogan's Heroes.)