Reviews for All American Nightmare
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16
That was one of the worst sex scenes I've read 'I slammed into her' with what? No actual description. What you punched her? Or did you through yourself at her with your body? Was over in 2 seconds. Nothings actually going on. Are they just intimately attached and that's it? Because that's what it sounded like. My god it was awful. Might as well of not of written anything. Clearly not your strength.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/16
Corr5092 chapter 15 . 7/8
will it be updated
lilmstran chapter 14 . 10/16/2013
loved it
keep going
can't wait to read more
booknerd0426 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Great so far!
CarolinaChuff chapter 15 . 8/30/2013
I hope you get it! Like like fic! hahah
booksxforxlife chapter 15 . 8/4/2013
nix69 chapter 15 . 7/26/2013
I hope you continue this story soon! I love it!
brittany08forever chapter 15 . 7/10/2013
Update soon pls
Edward's spouse chapter 15 . 5/2/2013
excellent. waiting for more. sorry to hear about your keyboard.
jennifer chapter 15 . 1/10/2013
cant wait for more
deedee cullen chapter 15 . 12/2/2012
I hope you update this story soon
fallinangelx3 chapter 15 . 11/28/2012
I love this story. Please update soon!
cutelilblonde1245 chapter 15 . 10/17/2012
great story
naive sweet girl chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I have just found your story and i cant wait to read all the following chapters:) maybe, emmet will kill edward but can edward avoid falling in love with bella and bella with him? Defenitely, not;) flor
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