Reviews for Hate You
TheRealPain chapter 5 . 6/7
You should continue this...why does authors stop giod stories i will never know ...what a drag
NarHina chapter 5 . 4/4/2016
That was cute I want to see Hinata and Naruto get together, but I wonder why Naruto is being mean when he likes Hinata.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
NaruHinaLover18 chapter 5 . 2/9/2015
Why'd you stop. Keep going
Seeker-Of-Love chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
This is exactly how my life with boys are...they are mean to me and later on tell me they like me..there was one however that i absolute can't stand, and he's always talking crap about me. Whats his problem and this other boy. I swear, I will never understand how little boys work.
llazo4108824 chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
I love this fanfic you should make more chapters of this fanfiction please.
Qchessy chapter 5 . 6/3/2013
please continue
Beast1998 chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
Come on Hina! You can do it!
ili777 chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
Want more of this, it's interesting, though Hinata is a bit (a lot) out of character, but who cares?
Love the kitty at the end :)
Update soon please :)
Rose Tiger chapter 5 . 10/8/2012
SullyR chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
Aren't I Naruto?-Glasses/check-evil/check-loves cats/check-blonde hair and blue eyes/no, I'm his twin brother...with black curly hair-DAMN
I'm soooo lazy chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
Naruhinalover chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
LOL it happens some times nice chapter update soon this is like a love/hate realtionship right?
SullyR chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
...I. Am. Sorry. Seriously, I'd write a song sayin how much you're stories are the bomb and that i'd hope you continue them're probably really, really busy!
Ugh! why do i pressure you! life fucking makes no sense when the good stories aren't finished yet...

I'm sorry.
SullyR chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
One word, well...actually four 1

Syn'ri chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
Awww, if it is a war he wants. I is a war he is going to get. Constructive Criticism time! Your grammar is pretty good, except the occasional forgetting of a punctuation such as...

Hinata ran into the bathroom and started crying. "Did I do something wrong?" she asked herself. "I thought it was just a joke, but those words are hurtful"

Of course you know it should be a period after hurtful.

And the plot is pretty nice, but I think you could do for more description and more depth. Not saying to go off on a writing binge like I do, but the beginning can be simple, but as the emotions get more complex, so should the sentences and description.

But all and all, it is worth continuing a read.
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