Reviews for Collateral Damage
Wolfiewarrior chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
my dear lord this fanfiction is amazing! I love Tenten with just about anyone though I must say that Kankuro/ Tenten and Shino/Tenten are my favorites. Plus I love Kankuro in this fashion ive read a few with him like this and a few with him as a playboy and I feel like him romantically either works but the rough rugged version is much more in character for him. this is amazing I'm going to go check out more of your stories I love your writing style too. P.s ever think of maybe writing a version of this from Kankuro's point of view? I mean you mentioned how he thought about things but im curious as to how you picture whats always going through his head Omg im sorry this is so long! I love you I love this FAnfiction thanks for more Kankuten!
Chloe chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
Update Please. Its been a month already. Update Soon. Greay Story
Fanwoman chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Oh, I think this is much more Kankuroish than a playboy. I really enjoyed how you reused established character traits, like his mocking condescension. The bit about healing each other without deadening the pain was interesting and lead to a nice contrast when he later didn't. The conflict at the end felt a bit rushed in its comparative lack of detail, but it was overall completely satisfying. Thank you!
Fanwoman chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
As much as I would have liked to experience some these flashbacks as they occurred, it would have kept you from having such a gripping and dire beginning. Then again, it also allows you to pack a whole lot of story into a smaller word count, which is also nice. This is so yummy, I don't know if I need lunch.
Fanwoman chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
"She decided she was either dead or completely high. When she opened her eyes and took note of the IV in her arm, she was relieved it was the drug thing."

How you take something so potentially heavy and make it humorous, I don't know.

"Neji at least had the decency to call her by her name and keep his voice at an even level which made it easier to tune out."

That one made me laugh out loud.

Yum.
Fanwoman chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
You don't hold back on the physical side of being a shinobi; Tenten goes through a lot in your stories. The details of her traumas and their affects on her thinking are always interesting and well used, and your voice for Tenten is so relatable while still being that distinctive sassy combination of amusing and forthright. Nice motivation for the abduction.
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Tired of failing to discover new stories that are good to read for my other ships, I finally have given up and come here to find something I haven't read during the business of the last long while. Thank you so much for yummy, entertaining stories and writing that demonstrates a proper command of the English language. Loving this already.
ShinoCoolGaaraAwesome chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
Loved the story! :D Not a lot of good Kankuro fics _
dominiquesb4 chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
I really liked it. This is the 1st Tenten and Kankaro story I read and I think you did a great job of keeping him in character. Good job!
Lynn D. Mariza chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
awww this was so cute. (i seem to be saying tht a lot lately...)
anyways, i think u did a wonderful job on both kankuro and tenten. it was really realistic, and it was a nice change, from the 'playful' personality.
though it was a bit short.
i wanted it to be longer.
anyways, i think that this fic is totally awesome :D
hope to c more of ur work :)
DeenaTweety chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
Ha I'm always stumbling across your fics, it seems! Anyway I loved this story. I really liked how you portrayed Kankuro. I think how you wrote him here is how I like him best, actually! Anyway I hope you continue to write wonderful fics!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 5 . 6/16/2012
I loved this story! It was AMAZING!
laurana117 chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
I loved this story! There are not a lot of KankuTen stories, so this one was such a surprise because it was very well written. I found your portrayal of Kankurou perfect, I like this one a lot better than the typical 'playboy' even though in my mind, you will not get many chicks with all that face paint, but oh well. :) I absolutely loved your story and would like it if you wrote more Kankuro and Tenten stories.
minniemousemom chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Excellent ending to the story you wrote love it
Cabbage cabrera chapter 5 . 4/30/2012
Loved every minute of this. Your portrayal of Kankuro was amazing i do tend to like the playboyish version of him but this was more how i imagine him acting.

KankuTen ftw! Thanks for writing this.
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