Reviews for Naruto metal adventures
justarandomperson64 chapter 2 . 2/10
Why did you go from (not-so) perfectly good standard dialogue with quotation marks to rp log/play/movie script form?
bearfan23 chapter 2 . 6/3/2016
I'd like to offer up a blader and bey
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
I'm making one in the new future a story with Naruto and beyblade because I see a lot of potential in this keep on and maybe we can see who finishes theirs first. Good Luck ; )
Cherie chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Upon reading this. You have a lot of work ahead of you, especially the spelling and grammar mistakes. It might be easier if you read more stories and keep writing, you'll get better. And..Naruto cross over with beyblade? Not a very good one. But that's my opinion. Keep writing.
ssjzohan chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
Hey do u need ocs and this seems awesome pm if u can and update
subterra59 chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
I got a character for you pm you in a sec
JJP123 chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
if you need a idea for a couple i favor for naruto x hikaru that dark skin blue haired girl with the bay aquario
faka chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
compose another
darrenk100 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
not much plot it is just bacicly a summery nedds work
Buttercupx102 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Its good! keep writing i want to know whats gonna happen! :)