|Reviews for Facepalm|
| Shadow Dream Catcher chapter 14 . 7/17/2014
I liked it, I thought it was funny and cute in Toph's own little evil way
| Assadart chapter 14 . 7/10/2014
the whole story was nice , different than what i usually read , but i liked the way you wrote the POV chapters ... i also like how you made Aang get over Katara and how he helped Toph with her plan , you get extra points for that ...
| cabasa chapter 14 . 6/28/2014
Aww i read this before. Though i stopped at chapter 7... Well i loved it! Humourous in a poetic way
| LimitedEternity chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Oh Toph is so sneaky and you portrayed that so well! But just one thing. I notice some of the sentences seemed a little choppy and when Toph described her actions they kind of cut the story a bit. Like everything didn't flow together as well as it could have, her actions stood on their own instead of flowing into the narritive if that makes sense?. But overall nice work!
| The Amazing Mumbo chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
From this chapter alone I'm hooked. You seem to use short sentences a lot and not very many longer ones. Also, when Toph was in the tree before she listened to Katara arguing with herself, she sensed Katara from in the tree.
| QueenOfSpades137 chapter 14 . 6/1/2014
Very interesting, I never thought about a Zutara story from Toph's point of view. It would make sense that she would be the one to get those two together since Aang is trying to keep Katara for himself, Sokka is trying to keep his sister an old maid, and Katara and Zuko both try to ignore their feelings. You wrote Toph very well, her personality really shone through. I got a bit of an insight on how her mind works through the cartoon and this just helped develop the ideas the writers probably didn't have time for. I'm definitely pleased she ended up with Aang since that was my mental explanation for them changing Toph from a big dude to a little but powerful girl. (To the producers: If you didn't want Aang to get with Toph, why did you make her a girl?!) Have a wonderful summer and happy writing.
From Dixie with Sweet-tea
| OlympianGirl1 chapter 14 . 6/1/2014
It's not bad. Just keep at it!
| I'm-sorry-for-being-me chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Only one chapter and I already love this. Amazing writing.
| Hey chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
I want their moments from Zutara's point of view...
| Me lol chapter 14 . 4/24/2014
| svp24151198 chapter 14 . 3/25/2014
Aww it's finished :( I liked reading this, it was a nice story
| svp24151198 chapter 9 . 3/25/2014
I love how you portray Aang and Toph's relationship, so sweet!
| svp24151198 chapter 6 . 3/25/2014
Awesome story so far, I'd like to see Zuko's POV sometime :)
| Irianna Marie chapter 14 . 3/25/2014
Loved it, especially adding in the Taangst:)
| Irianna Marie chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Toph is marvelously devious, isn't she?