|Reviews for Fresh Start|
| narutojuubimode chapter 27 . 10/25
please can you start updating all of your stories. they are very good and all but if you don't give them updates regularly then it becomes seriously boring. please try and update them all.
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/19
I know ash said she would not forgive misty for what she did but I think he should give her one More chance she deserves that much and from what I read in previous chapters even tho he's still mad at her I can tell she still holds a very special place in his heart even if he doesn't want to admit it I'd say let her go into the hearm with ash at some point and I can see that misty regrets making that bad choice back then and I can tell she's still in love with ash and he holds a special place in her heart like ash dose so please do give misty a chance to be in the harem with ash and update soon
| SacredSwordFire chapter 5 . 9/15
i cant find the extended version so where is it?
| Hyrulian Hero Akai chapter 27 . 9/12
Sooo... is this on Hiatus...? Abandoned...? Any plans to update any time soon? Lost track of this fic for a while and when I find it again its not been updated in forever :(
| Seki108 chapter 27 . 9/6
Well, it's been years, but it seems like I'm not the only one who would be interested in this continuing. Sad to see Ash lost again in the anime, especially when he actually played smarter this time...still, status quo is god and all that stuff.
| Mike Kromer chapter 27 . 8/24
I want more, keep it up, Love it so far. I really would love to see the latios lemon. Geus I'll never see it lol. Don't stop writing your lemons, especially with an R rated fic. If people complain, they are idiots and don't know about anyone's feelings but themselves. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/1
Its been forever!
Will we least know how things end? Do each girl have girls and boys who use aura?
Least some closure?
| Cool reader chapter 7 . 7/29
I guessed it will be flannery I don't know why but it just seems like that she is very porny/horny
| ThiefCrusher750 chapter 1 . 7/27
Will Ash save May from drews brainwashing and will Ash save Misty from ritchie and both be allowed into his harem? Also can Roxy be in the harem?
| eldarfan1 chapter 21 . 7/25
and zion will probably die...
| eldarfan1 chapter 10 . 7/25
with the status moves wrecking things im starting to rethink only using attack moves in pokemon
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/19
keep it up this history is great
| DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 8 . 7/19
Good to see Paul so humiliated.
The lemon was a little weird don't know how to explain it. I admit that it would be kind of strange to kiss a girl knowing she put her mouth on other guy's family jewels.
Arceus want Ash to have kids but he don't want to have kids, then he should be the one using protection and not only the girls.
| Len Stormcrow chapter 27 . 7/18
Wow what is next.
| Len Stormcrow chapter 26 . 7/18