Reviews for Disappeared
the darkone chapter 21 . 4/14/2014
Make a seqol to it. I'd love to see what happens to them after high school.
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 21 . 7/22/2013
*Imagines what this would look like in a game*

Awesome chapter... I hope the next chapter comes soon!

*Checks time* Wow... I read all these chapters in... only 30 mins!

Not too much of a accomplishment, I can read more anytime!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 20 . 7/22/2013
Dark Poison and Shattered Love fits the name of the chapter...

Awesome and a bit dark engulfed chapter!

All characters are in character

But why is this reminding me of the story I made of Roxas at a... oh never mind! XD
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 19 . 7/22/2013
HMPFT! *Roxas lets go of me*

Me: UGH! Could you have been any sweeter?
Roxas: Sorry, we don't spoil anything, until it happens!
Both: ...

Awesome Chapter, and now I know I was right! Then all the time all characters were in character... even now! XD
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 18 . 7/22/2013
Um... hello? This is Kingdom Hearts... right?
Next thing you know, Sonic comes to help Roxas out!

(More appealing to me than Mario, no offence to the people who like him...)

Awesome Chapter, and all the characters were in character... and now I know those people were really- HMPFT! *Roxas drags me to the next chapter to not reveal any character in the fight!*
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 17 . 7/22/2013
Awesome- wait... THEY ARE GIVING US DRUGS TO STAY IN SCHOOL!? XD

And what did Axel hit him with... I bet a ruler... wow... Pun intended!

Back to what I was saying: Awesome Chapter, as always all characters were in character!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 16 . 7/22/2013
Short, but nice chapter!

Awwwwwww, it gonna end soon?

And I just found the story! DX/XD

All characters are in character!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 15 . 7/22/2013
Wow... very... erm... very emotional!

Awesome chapter!

The Oblivion is her feelings?

Hope she doesn't die... but only one way to find out!

*Goes to the next chapter*
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 14 . 7/22/2013
Ok... now I really think I know who they are... and again: WHAT ABOTU NAMINE AND ROXAS THAT YOU ARE DOING!? XD

Awesome chapter, as always the characters are in character

Now... to ne next chapter!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 13 . 7/22/2013
Wow... that escalated quickly...

And again: What about Namine?

Characters are in full character!

And it was a awesome chapter!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 12 . 7/22/2013
*Stares* Living hell... living- *Ok, stop daydreaming!*

Awesome chapter!

It was short but it was good, and I think Ven won't spray Roxas with water on his head again... oh, and is Roxas thinking Namine?

And what about Xion?

All characters were in character!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 11 . 7/22/2013
Ok that is it!

*Goes into the story and dumps the water on Ven's head*
Ven: What the hell did you do that for!?
Me: Because... you do that to your brother, now it's you who's gonna get it!
Ven: *Screams and runs away*
Me: Thought so...

Awesome chapter, all characters are in character... and now I have to go get someone... who can shoot water at him... who is a Organization XIII member... just wait a sec... *Evil grin*
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 10 . 7/22/2013
*Dazed for a moment* Uhhhhh... *Goes back to reality*

Wha-?! Oh! Awesome chapter... but I think I know who the two people fighting were!

If it is true... all the characters were in character!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
Now... that was a awesome chapter!

Now for Xion... I am feeling some sort of suspicion...

All characters are in character as usual!
Knight of the Shining Star chapter 8 . 7/22/2013
Awesome chapter, and a not horrible ending!

Xigbar's reaction is daily me whenever someone asks me to draw something for them... that is a way I am like Namine!

Xigbar... you are like the game of Sonic 06! You deify gravity! XD
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