|Reviews for Hot Chocolate|
| Eiffel chapter 1 . 3/14
I love this. It fits there character perfectly and you didn't have any mistakes! Good 4 you! C:
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 1/9
Ahhhhh! Perfect moment!
| The Morning Sun chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Read this a long while ago. Just never had the time or chance or comment.
So now that I do:
It was great!
Enough detail to produce a storyline, but not too much, to where it seems like too much words and less smut.
Great dialogue between the characters; Wally was Wally and Artemis was portrayed perfectly.
Wonderful job, summing it up in the end. I really enjoyed the cute moment of embarrassment at the end. A really good conclusion. : )
| mimi-iam chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
this is the most wonderful fic i've ever read
gave me dokis, made me love these characters more as people, safnsaskfn
you did a great job
i found 1 typo: "thatthat" before you mention when Artemis is most affectionate
Thank you for this wonderful fic!
| wait- WHAT chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
(-belive this was my acuall reaction-)
your- ...whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa, wait, back up, back up, ba- ba- ba- ba- back up, this is your first smut fic!?
noo way fam, NOOOOO WAY oh my God
I CANT EVEN SPEAK, HOW DO I PROCESS THAT, OR EVEN BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW AMAZING THAT WAS!
oh my gosh
man, im speachless
seriously, that was..
oh my GOD
that was like SOO GREAT!
aw man, i dont think you even know..
oh my God
it- i-, it was just so GReat
i cant even use words other than great because.. ehhhh
but man, that was your first-
i, i cant, i cant process this
it wasnt even to like TOOO "smutty"
but had like the best amount of like 'lust' if that doesnt sound weird
the love and conection they have overall is beautiful
and then the-
OH MY GOD
i- you dont even know
OH MY GODD
okay i need to stop, im gonna still try and process everything, but man seriously
that was Amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
"Let's have some fun this beat is sick, I wanna take a ride on your disco stick don't think too much just bust that dick, I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!" Lady Gaga
| Darkest Nightmare's Dread chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I laughed at Wally's corny line. Hilarious.
| the puzzler chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
it was toooooooooooo llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggg
| andrea carolina chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
OMG ! i love it it's amazing ha-ha ! XD :D this is pretty cool
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
This was amazing! I loved it! Please write more!
| fredric.marquez.3 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Wow that was great good job Veg :3
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
This was simply amazing! I love some good smut but this was definitely different. It wasn't just about the sex, but actual love, and I love that :) Write more please c:
| Mander13 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
That was some hot smut, umf yes
| Roxy-Bluff chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Wow! that was absolutely great! so hot and sweet at the same time) And being in charge is so like Artemis))
You should write more something like this.
| LynDea chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
that was pretty awesome!:D loved it:]