|Reviews for Hot Chocolate|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Best thing I've ever read
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13
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| Cupcakecat127 chapter 1 . 6/6
you should be arrested for writing such bad fanfiction:(
| nookcakepop chapter 1 . 5/26
| Jess chapter 1 . 4/3
Love your fanfic! Please write more. I've shipped these two ever since Artemis first came on young justice.
| restrictedcrayon chapter 1 . 2/1
THAT WAS EXCELLENT! I love love love when Wally's thoughts and physical and emotional feelings are illuminated. And the various grunts and moans in sweet, perfect placement! You also share a sickeningly lovely-beautiful insight into a love-filled relationship, like in the thoughts they have in the different moments of sex. So sweet... I love seeing Wally love Artemis oh my god.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
you should do the other characters but if they don't have an love interest you could use somebody else not claimed
| Spitfire Fan chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
I honestly love this so so much 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
OH MY GOD this was AMAZING
| Eiffel chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
I love this. It fits there character perfectly and you didn't have any mistakes! Good 4 you! C:
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Ahhhhh! Perfect moment!
| Morning Sun Of Pandora chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Read this a long while ago. Just never had the time or chance or comment.
So now that I do:
It was great!
Enough detail to produce a storyline, but not too much, to where it seems like too much words and less smut.
Great dialogue between the characters; Wally was Wally and Artemis was portrayed perfectly.
Wonderful job, summing it up in the end. I really enjoyed the cute moment of embarrassment at the end. A really good conclusion. : )
| DGMachine chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
this is the most wonderful fic i've ever read
gave me dokis, made me love these characters more as people, safnsaskfn
you did a great job
i found 1 typo: "thatthat" before you mention when Artemis is most affectionate
Thank you for this wonderful fic!
| wait- WHAT chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
(-belive this was my acuall reaction-)
your- ...whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa, wait, back up, back up, ba- ba- ba- ba- back up, this is your first smut fic!?
noo way fam, NOOOOO WAY oh my God
I CANT EVEN SPEAK, HOW DO I PROCESS THAT, OR EVEN BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW AMAZING THAT WAS!
oh my gosh
man, im speachless
seriously, that was..
oh my GOD
that was like SOO GREAT!
aw man, i dont think you even know..
oh my God
it- i-, it was just so GReat
i cant even use words other than great because.. ehhhh
but man, that was your first-
i, i cant, i cant process this
it wasnt even to like TOOO "smutty"
but had like the best amount of like 'lust' if that doesnt sound weird
the love and conection they have overall is beautiful
and then the-
OH MY GOD
i- you dont even know
OH MY GODD
okay i need to stop, im gonna still try and process everything, but man seriously
that was Amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
"Let's have some fun this beat is sick, I wanna take a ride on your disco stick don't think too much just bust that dick, I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!" Lady Gaga