Reviews for There's Someone Else
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
You should write a sequel
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I hope you make more characters of this it's good.
Enakra chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
I really think that this episode could really end in a thermonuclear warfare...
For real... Poor Taka, i know that anger, but you got to keep your head on the marks, otherwise youll get to kill your own brother.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Uh, Scar, I wouldn't talk to ol' Muffy if I was you...
Salunatic chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Thats just sad. Being rejected upfront when you're proposing. Haizz... wait till he finds out the Lion in question is his brother...
Anonymous Phantom Writer chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Cute. Yes, cute. If you count making my eyes water with those last two lines as cute. You give a beautiful contrast between Taka and Scar, and I do like Sarabi suggesting that he needs to get help about the mood swings. All in all a great one shot, if not a little tearjerking.
Emerald dreamer96 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
The last sentence is just devastating.
Jennarei chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Fudging. Epic.

'nough said BD
NinaRoja chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I can only imagine what happened next...

Great job!
Shinku-momochi chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Very nice and well written, I just love how scar is portrayed here.
petitprincess chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
No don't stop it, please continue the story. It's really sad. But, it's really good too.
TMNTTLK lover chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
OMG poor Taka. ANd when he finds out it's his own brother it'll crush him even more and we all know what happens after that. Sad but you did a great job in writing it.
Cylocrux chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Oh no... My favorite part had to be "I honestly think you might even need some help." That was a good thing to say... The little reference to Taka and Mufasa's father was interesting - I always like knowing the different ways one can portray his attitude towards his sons. Boy, if Taka thought this conversation was awful, he's gonna be in for a big shock!
Emily642 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
My heart broke when I read the last part about Mufasa. He doesn't know :'(
Fewtch chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
That was amazing... Such emotion! I loved it!