Reviews for Alone
Crystalzap chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
*sigh* no it's not the right spelling, you isn't 'yoo' the 'u' is at the end and Vegeta is spelled wrong too, as is a few other things... plus the grammar X(

Anyway I like the idea, but it's a bit hard to understand
Arisu Tsuranu chapter 2 . 5/18/2006
WAH! how old is gohan? WAH!
otepoti chapter 8 . 9/4/2004
hi just a poke to see if your/this ff is still alive

i love this story and would love to see it continue -
Dirbatua chapter 8 . 7/5/2004
i do hope u continue and find a beta soon
Seta Kaede chapter 8 . 8/27/2003
great story, wish you hadn't stopped!
BJ chapter 8 . 8/19/2003
I could beta for you. I'm not sure if i'd be any good, but i can try. :)
awe chapter 8 . 6/21/2003
Jesus Christ, learn some grammar in the dialogs. It is really annoying.
Jessie chapter 8 . 5/21/2003
NO romance plz also, if u can, don't make Gohan like the evil people did for the American series

Ex:not dorky & no sayaman, but mabe a cool Gold Fighter
Silver chapter 8 . 1/27/2003
Hi! I really love this story and was soo happy when you started paying attention to it again. I'd love to beta read for you.
pannybaby123 chapter 8 . 1/26/2003
i love it ! i realy do . . . i fell bad 4 Gohan but he's a cuttie wit lil Goten eheh well if u need a beta reader i can possibaly help . . . Well write more soon
SwomeSwan chapter 7 . 1/20/2003
This was great! I hope to read some more of your story soon! :D
otepoti chapter 7 . 1/20/2003
great chapter - geat story looking fowards to the rest of this
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2002
hey i think they are used in the other fics but i love cueball and shorty. Also if he is still bald, baldy. :)
amy chapter 6 . 12/11/2002
Hope you'll update again this story is the best
Ashley chapter 6 . 12/10/2002
stay at level 3 super syain
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