|Reviews for His and Her Stalker|
| The Red Star chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
This was a rather interesting story, to say the least. I will say this, though. I think the story would be a lot better if you fleshed out the events a bit, writing them as they happened, rather than having them in past tense. It would drastically increase the entertainment value of the story, I think.
There were a few errors, mostly missing words at various points in the story. They're relatively obvious if you read it over, but they don't completely break the flow of the story.
It's a good oneshot, but it's a bit too short for my tastes. Onto the next one!
Forever in the Sky,
The Red Star
| Toshiro Ricky chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
That realy cute. .! XD
| You will fear my laser face chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
have you thought of doing a princess ressurrection/naruto over?