|Reviews for The Devil's Candy|
| RinLeonhardt chapter 1 . 12h ago
Hnnnggg.. This needs another chapter. omfg.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
please update this story.
| UrgentSergent chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Wish u would update this..._ u breaking ma heart...
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Oh man! I wish u would continue this... I kno uv got a lot of comments on it but u should continue it be epic! And I wanna see how lightening would "tame" fang and the three way thingy... Hope u do update
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Wow, I really like this story very well written and so much emotion in it, I hope u continue it, but if ya don't this is also good for a one chapter
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Whoa... This sounds hot... Hope u reaaaalllyyy update it! So much sususpence! Gotta kno wats happens! 0_0
| Akira102 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
oohh this is a good story i hope u continue it w
| Lorenzo Soledad chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
whoa great start! I love your stories they're very well build, so much humor, drama, angst, suspence and all kind of goodies along the read:)) although there's a lack of happy endings... YOU are a very good writer!
I absolutely love futa Yun Fang:D
Hope you have time to update some off them stories soon.
| Celestia GF of the Void chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
So, despite it being 7 months since you posted this, i'm going to follow and give you the benefit of the doubt, so please update soon
| Call Me Ray chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Hi Ray here, I feel like i've reviewed for this story, but either way I'm going to do it again. Now from what I just read all I got was wow! I mean that was amazing, fantastic, I've nver read something so detailed yet it all seemed to...I don't even know how to describe it, everything just felt...right. Like everything was set and ordered perfectly. Now I must know are you secretly a Demi-god/goddess becuase I swear that what I just read came from some god above.
Now on with the review my fellow author!
I demand that you make the second chapter, and this is for the safety of you and your other readers, why you ask, becuase if I don't get that second chapter I swear I'm going to die. Trust me you won't like it when I die, pshhhh I know I won't.
Other than that though I loved it and I hope you find something worth wild for while proceeding in your writing career.
With lots of love
| Helpless Beggar chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Can u please give this story as much attention as Smoke and Mirrors
| Aeskiel chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Can't wait for your next chapter for this!
My jaw literally dropped. Your stories are always worth the wait!
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
How did I miss this one?
| Sagnus chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I have nothing constructive to say. This review exists on the hopes that more reviews more updates.
| Pyric chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Likin the concept. Lookin forward to more!