|Reviews for Worth Dying For|
| Aoi Shinkaze chapter 26 . 2/21
I would recommend you write the new story separately.
I am writing a story that was, frankly, utterly horrible and a disgrace to how I can truly write.
So I am overriding the chapters with newer, better ones.
Considering that you are changing the plot, I would say post the redone story as an entirely separate one, and keep this one up.
There is nothing wrong with it, and I just finished reading it, so I quite like it as it is.
Also, if would not mind, would you give me a piece of advice?
The fic that I mentioned above, I had gotten several chapters into the horrific thing and so, should I take down the chapters? I do not know if reviews stick to chapters that have been taken down, and I do not wish to remove the reviews that were helpful and/or motivating, so if you could advise me on what to do in this situation? I know it is rather random, but I thought a fellow author going through similar troubles could help.
I really like this, even if, the gore is, well, more gory than I expected.
Though the characters mesh really well, and I think the story as a whole flows very nicely.
| StarOfTime chapter 26 . 1/30
New story. My argument being that all the detail here in first person POV gives deeper insight, so if readers want more depth then they need only read this story
| StarOfTime chapter 25 . 1/30
Correction. -Dono is above both san and sama in levels respect. San is the everyday attachment. Sama is high respect. Dono confers utmost respect for the person whose name you attach it to.
| owlguy chapter 26 . 1/22
Great job so far.
| OctoberThirtyFirst chapter 2 . 1/17
I loved the beginning italics part. heck, i shivered all through that. Then the main story started and I was like... eh. too many insignificant details, imo, too much backstory. description is well and good, but unless it serves a purpose - and there's only so much scene setting to be done - it gets boring. for me. I love the idea though, and perhaps I'll get used to the writing style.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/10
Why would we want to read a fic detailing his life when you've already revealed that in the end Naruto is captured and killed?
| SearingFireBlaze chapter 1 . 1/10
Does anyone want a hug?
Well too BAD!
| orkestrzhopa chapter 26 . 1/6
i would honestly prefer it as a whole new story. mostly because it'd be very interesting comparing the two side by side and noting the changes in plot/writing style/etc.
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
And more canon horse-shit apparently.
| earfluffy chapter 21 . 12/26/2013
Out damned spot! Out, I say!
| earfluffy chapter 18 . 12/24/2013
I just realized the the way Sasuke gives everybody nicknames is quite a bit like canon!Naruto.
| kirara the great chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
what if Naruto's world is like millions of years after ours and that thing that the diayamo's nephew found was like a tablet or something like that (that was my instant reaction)
| ToLazy4Name chapter 26 . 12/14/2013
I prefer the first person experience.
Rewrite it if you wish, it IS your story, but I personally enjoy the insight we get into the characters by seeing from their view.
| Keiren-Kun89 chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
I like it!
| Crazed King chapter 26 . 11/15/2013
Awesome story! I think you should post the rewrite as a new story, cause I am favoring this style of pov rater than the other. It'll also be that readers can have a choice to read this one or that one, the original or new. Ja!