Reviews for Trust
Guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2012
i loved every single thing about it. no lie.
Gororo chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
Hey Everybody!Pit just looks young but Pit has mentioned before in the game that it has been 25 years since the last game.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
This is one great story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
nice sex story ive always wanted them to be in love
Motley World Studios chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Very interesting fanfiction between Palutena and Pit. Nice work!
me123 chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
very nice
Finn the SexGod chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
THAT WAS GREAT! I loved every chapter and it made me horny. You should consider making a sequel :)
UraLoop chapter 6 . 7/18/2012
People need to be making more Kid Icarus fics, good'un, right there!
The "naughty Pit" twist was surprising, great job!
Soon-logged-in chapter 6 . 7/9/2012
wow. its just wow. this story was great. i read it over and over again! there needs to be mor pitpalutena in the world
Sorelliena chapter 6 . 7/6/2012
AHAHAHA

MAN I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO FEEL

THAT LAST PART WITH THE ONE LINERS MADE ME ROLL WITH GIGGLES

ALL I KNOW WAS THAT IF I WERE PIT I'D HAVE DIED FROM HOW INTENSE THAT WAS. God this made me giggle WAYYY TOO MUCH, now that I've gotten over the strangeness of their during-sex commentary, I seriously liked this! Good job I say :D
Sorelliena chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
I can't believe I'm giggling while they're doing the dirty. Dear lord. XDDDDD

oh man I know what's coming next... Pit! (Literally!)
Sorelliena chapter 3 . 7/6/2012
AWW.

AWWW B'AWWWWW. Oh man you're super good at imitating KI dialogue!
Sorelliena chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Man I'm imagining their whole conversation with the voice actors in my head... AHAHAHA apparently Pit is like... 14 or something? Adults, huh. XD
Sorelliena chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Oh dear. Compelling but risky. Let's see how these two turn out!
FallenAngelEstel chapter 6 . 4/30/2012
This story was great! I enjoyed reading it a lot! I loved the joke at the end, it made me laugh! I love how innocent Pit is, whenever he is put in this kind of situation!
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