Reviews for Enemies
Queen of War chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Niiiiiiice! Especially the ending. I like how you reveal their real motives for hating each other. It's not their father's favor, but their own jealousy that makes them hate one another. It's also cool how you've set Cesare up as the one in control, while Juan is flailing around, emotionally and physically, a juicy hint at who will win this battle. I think some more details, such as what they were feeling when they looked into each others eyes, would have added a lot, but this is a great fic.
Ella Sander Castle-Fey chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I love these two being enemies. It is probably weird, but I find it exhilarating. The discrepancies between Cesare and Juan grow broader and broader in the series and surely your version of the sequence would have perfectly fit in. Well, you must have guessed that I love your fiction, then ;)