Reviews for War of the West
ChocolateTeapot chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
Another great chapter. The description of the barbarian border was awesome, it really set the scene. I really like the last two paragraphs too, particularly the narrator's realisation that he has made a mistake.
ChocolateTeapot chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
Great chapter! Wen Tao also seems like a very intriguing character. The details are really good and give the story a feeling of place.
ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Great work! The dialogue sounds right and I really like the atmosphere. Both Francois and Alexandre seem like very interesting characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!