Reviews for Emotions Are a Privilege
tvlover44 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I really liked it! Please continue with our voodoo doll Logan stories!
LazyLazyWriter chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Nice story :-)
LazyLazyWriter chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Nice story :-)
squoctobird chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
The wording was very repetitive. You siad "with out any emotion" or "emotionless" too many times to count. Try to find words and phrases that convey the same thing. Dictionary. Com is a good place to look. It will keep the reader interested instead of it feeling like they are reading the same thing over and over.

Also, it would have been beneficial to explain a little bit more of why Logan has PTSD so that we could sympathize with him.

This was a good idea, you just need to flesh it out a bit more, give us more details.

My reviews are never meant to be malicious or hurtful. Only helpful by giving constructive criticism. Please don't be offended. )
CelestialSonata7 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
I love that last line, when Carlos told him to smile. So sweet! X3