|Reviews for Olivine Romance|
| Blue Leaf Green chapter 41 . 6/29/2020
Can't believe how right Elaine and Pryce were about Morty..
I think the thing that Elaine did to hurt Jasmine, was that she only conceived Jasmine so that David would marry her and give her a stable financial situation / home.
Quickly looking to chapter 74, it seems Elaine told Jasmine to get pregnant in order to survive. But Jasmine did not want to continue the cycle that her mother created, getting pregnant so as to get a man's financial help, and then raising and telling her child that men only use them for sex. Jasmine's fears of love and pregnancy also come from her mother's disturbing actions and views that she and other women need to bear a child for a man in order to have a home.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/22/2020
My GOD, this is depressing... Jasmine is such an absolutely miserable character; she hates everything and everyone. At this point, I'm going to keep reading another couple of chapters, just to see if things pick up, but if this is just 660k words of her moaning about how miserable she is, I don't think I can keep going for too much longer.
| Blue Leaf Green chapter 21 . 10/25/2019
The ending of the chapter makes me wonder if that was also Red's way of saying I love you when leaving her
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/29/2019
I can't tell if this is some lame ass lesbo garbage or...
5 minutes of pondering later it just some lesbo garbage isn't it
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/29/2019
Yeah your a loser we get it
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2019
| Anonymous chapter 70 . 5/1/2018
I have to say, I really can't believe how much time I wasted reading this fanfic. Even though I did attempt to enjoy this story, I found myself skipping to chapters that involved fights. I'm sorry but my reaction to this story can be summed up with WTH.
| Emmerlaus chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
I really hope you will give Jasmine a happy ending.
| djsoresu chapter 75 . 12/8/2017
Ethan wtf. Taking cliffhanger too literally. Honestly shook rn.
| EmeraldDragon1 chapter 75 . 12/8/2017
This got super dark super quick. Really hope this gets resolved, soon! And I SERIOUSLY need to get back to writing! Anyway, gripping, if depressing, chapter, can't wait to read more!
| Starship King chapter 71 . 10/25/2017
greatest Pokemon story ever
| Izanagi chapter 71 . 9/25/2017
Fine! You want your review, you get your review! This is a very good read. But what the hell is up with a month-long wait after that ridiculous cliffhanger? Don't screw around with me!
| evolvelove chapter 63 . 6/24/2016
Please...i bedge you pls...dont give up...
i just read your story and is amazing...
pls i need to read an epilogue
please update! i fucking bedge you!
| Namikaze18 chapter 63 . 6/20/2016
wow this is possibly one of the most thought out Pokemon stories ever. however it really was an emotional rollercoaster. but I really like the way it's going! I'm excited for a red vs. jasmine battle
| Namikaze18 chapter 29 . 6/19/2016
omg hearing about Jasmine's mom legit made me cry. I hope she sees how amazing her daughter is now