Reviews for The adventure begins
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
plz hurry up
camhop chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
good story! i think you should continue
fanficsaremylife chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Really good love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Love it. how about the next chapter can be about roise and Dylan having brother and sister time. then lily comes in and they have a lot more fun. Benjamin founds out that Kelly is sick,so he takes care of her. then he gets a flashback when his wife died because of the same thing. he loses his mind and he thinks that later Kelly will be gone. Can Kelly get better? Will Bemjamin soon finds out that Kelly is ok? Will Dylan and lily have their more bonding time and Dylan finds out that Lily will be babysitting him and rosei? but most importantly who will take care of the zoo?
Superwholock-OnceUponaTime-HP chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
You should write more! This was very good!
Anonomous chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Write more! I like this so far.
Meh chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Keep on! I like the start.
samm chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
this is cute
perniH chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Yes a Benjamin/Kelly story! Give us more please :D
Chachaperon chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
I love your story, I'm waiting for the next chapter because I love this couple
EleKat chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Please add another chapter! :)
Victoria Andersen chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This is a pretty good story, but I would get your story beta-ed for typos, and I would try to make it a little less choppy. Otherwise this is good.
TheGleeker99 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Cute keep goin
xxMandixx chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
More? Please?
darlingcas chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
That was so sweet! I loved them together in the movie and I liked this fic. So cute!
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