Reviews for To Serve, Honor and Love
JustSu chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I really, really like your Edward, Pen. His integrity draws me in. (I hope this is the right way to say it)

Have you finished writing number 4? Because there won't be more tags on Robporn if you don't do your work, missy. LMAO.

Love the chapter and you, my crazy friend.

Besitos!

Su.
arrime chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
ok, so I cryed while reading this,and I guess I'll have to get used to it. poor bella and her babies:(
KITTY888 chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Kalimera! loved the Epov and the part with Chris awwwwwwwww!
XHellokitty99X chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
*Tears* Wow think chapter had me in tears... But good to see where Edward come from... Now I wonder when he would give Chris message to her... Can't wait for more!
rockymickey chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
thanks
TrulyOutrageous chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Love it especially the part with Edward and Charlie.
AliceCullenJasperHail chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
What can I say...this is a really touching chapter. I can't even begin to imagine what Edward's parens feel when their only son is risking his life every day, or how Bella's kids are coping with their mom away.

By the end of the chap you had my eyes stinking :d. I'm glad we saw E's pov, his you for yet again an amazing chap! Loved it!
evilnat chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
I liked the EPOV. He seemed sensitive yet I'm sure he's going to be good at his job. He already has a connection to Bella and I think he's been looking for someone for a long time. But who knows how they will get there! I can't wait to see what you do!

Liked all the technical terms it was realistic but didn't take over the story.

Thanks for the update!

Xx
HockeyChick10 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
Marineward is such a sweetheart with Lisa and Chris. That part was adorable. Poor Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter!
littlelizruth chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
you kow us well and how much we love our EPOV. i'm excited to see how these two grow together and get as close as they were in chapter 1
tff000 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
good to get a look at e's life
BeckThom chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
I can barely see my screen to tell you how much I appreciate your effort here-what a beautiful, beautiful story! I'm moved almost beyond words. I did want you to know how much I love what you're crafting-the characters are amazing.

Many, many thanks!
eli-rose chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
αν θελει ο Εντουαρντ παιδια εδω!Be the father of my children I beg you Edward!Rabbit mother θα γινω για παρτη σου!χαχχαχα

περα απο την πλακα,ηταν ενα πολυ συγκινητικο κεφαλαιο και για τους δυο χαρακτηρες!Αν και δεν προσφερε παρα πολλα απο πλευρα δρασης παρειχε ανεκτιμητη insight και στους δυο!

Well done!

:-)
Courtney37 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
You are Killing me woman! I cried in yet another chapter. Lol! I'm glad to see Edward has some attraction to Bella. That's a good start. & her kids seem to like him. Now I'm not up to politics or the war so what happened in 2006? Can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now.
wackynicolecsu chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
awesome! LOVED IT!
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