Reviews for To Serve, Honor and Love
Oilily chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
*sniff* Oh heartclenchingly (is that even a word?) and beautifully written! You have me crying here, Pen! I wish Bella to gain trust in Edward so that she can open up to him and let him help her. In several ways... ;))) Loved the part with Edward's parents and I love the repeated mention of the grey hair. Makes me wonder what Rob will look like one day with grey hair. Great chapter and I'm so looking forward to more! And I'm in awe of you. Did you have to research this military stuff or did you know it already?

And I enjoyed a Carlisle who can't see blood. Bwahaha, that's a first, I think! Your Charlie is great! Oh, and I looooved the interaction between Lisa and Edward. Soooo cute! *sigh* And poor Chris... I hope, we will see more of these sweet kids! Preferably combined with Edward. *waves*
texbratt67 chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
Lovin' it. Looking forward to reading more
missouriangel chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I am loving MarineWard! Ok I cried just a bit..:) But thats ok! If you ever need a prereader, I'm your gal ;)

missouriangel chapter 2 . 5/30/2012
Thanks for the get well wishes! I'm just now getting around to reading the chapter.. sorry! Sucks ass being sick and nothing slows down for it! Great chapter BTW.. I'm really getting into it and I'm not one to read stories that aren't complete :)

JustSu chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I really, really like your Edward, Pen. His integrity draws me in. (I hope this is the right way to say it)

Have you finished writing number 4? Because there won't be more tags on Robporn if you don't do your work, missy. LMAO.

Love the chapter and you, my crazy friend.


arrime chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
ok, so I cryed while reading this,and I guess I'll have to get used to it. poor bella and her babies:(
KITTY888 chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Kalimera! loved the Epov and the part with Chris awwwwwwwww!
XHellokitty99X chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
*Tears* Wow think chapter had me in tears... But good to see where Edward come from... Now I wonder when he would give Chris message to her... Can't wait for more!
rockymickey chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
TrulyOutrageous chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Love it especially the part with Edward and Charlie.
AliceCullenJasperHail chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
What can I say...this is a really touching chapter. I can't even begin to imagine what Edward's parens feel when their only son is risking his life every day, or how Bella's kids are coping with their mom away.

By the end of the chap you had my eyes stinking :d. I'm glad we saw E's pov, his you for yet again an amazing chap! Loved it!
evilnat chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
I liked the EPOV. He seemed sensitive yet I'm sure he's going to be good at his job. He already has a connection to Bella and I think he's been looking for someone for a long time. But who knows how they will get there! I can't wait to see what you do!

Liked all the technical terms it was realistic but didn't take over the story.

Thanks for the update!

HockeyChick10 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
Marineward is such a sweetheart with Lisa and Chris. That part was adorable. Poor Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter!
littlelizruth chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
you kow us well and how much we love our EPOV. i'm excited to see how these two grow together and get as close as they were in chapter 1
tff000 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
good to get a look at e's life
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