Reviews for To Serve, Honor and Love
MinaRivera chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
I loved Carlisle and Esme. You made them so real! Charlie and Sue were also a treat, but Bella's kids were so freaking precious! It broke my heart a bit.

Another great chapter, Pen. I can't wait to read more!

xoxox

Mina
MinaRivera chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
Finally got to read this chapter and I'm impressed with the research you did for this. GOOD JOB, PEN!

xoxox

Mina
LAL69 chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
thank yoU! I am so hooked.
Julie Rose24 chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
this chapter brought tears to my eyes. I have a nephew that is in the army. He will be coming home in June. Then he will be shipped over seas to aphganistan ( sorry if splet wrong). Again I look forward to the next update.

Julie
Julie Rose24 chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
I have read your other story and loved it. I have started reading this one, and I'm liking what I have read so far. Can not wait for the next update
Oilily chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
*sniff* Oh my...so heartclenchingly (is that even a word?) and beautifully written! You have me crying here, Pen! I wish Bella to gain trust in Edward so that she can open up to him and let him help her. In several ways... ;))) Loved the part with Edward's parents and I love the repeated mention of the grey hair. Makes me wonder what Rob will look like one day with grey hair. Great chapter and I'm so looking forward to more! And I'm in awe of you. Did you have to research this military stuff or did you know it already?

And I enjoyed a Carlisle who can't see blood. Bwahaha, that's a first, I think! Your Charlie is great! Oh, and I looooved the interaction between Lisa and Edward. Soooo cute! *sigh* And poor Chris... I hope, we will see more of these sweet kids! Preferably combined with Edward. *waves*
texbratt67 chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
Lovin' it. Looking forward to reading more
missouriangel chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I am loving MarineWard! Ok I cried just a bit..:) But thats ok! If you ever need a prereader, I'm your gal ;)

Angel
missouriangel chapter 2 . 5/30/2012
Thanks for the get well wishes! I'm just now getting around to reading the chapter.. sorry! Sucks ass being sick and nothing slows down for it! Great chapter BTW.. I'm really getting into it and I'm not one to read stories that aren't complete :)

Angel
JustSu chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
I really, really like your Edward, Pen. His integrity draws me in. (I hope this is the right way to say it)

Have you finished writing number 4? Because there won't be more tags on Robporn if you don't do your work, missy. LMAO.

Love the chapter and you, my crazy friend.

Besitos!

Su.
arrime chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
ok, so I cryed while reading this,and I guess I'll have to get used to it. poor bella and her babies:(
KITTY888 chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Kalimera! loved the Epov and the part with Chris awwwwwwwww!
XHellokitty99X chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
*Tears* Wow think chapter had me in tears... But good to see where Edward come from... Now I wonder when he would give Chris message to her... Can't wait for more!
rockymickey chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
thanks
TrulyOutrageous chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
Love it especially the part with Edward and Charlie.
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