|Reviews for A Life Changing Loan|
| Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Loved this! I wish Jasper would've appreciated the gesture Edward made, though. He seems to have a chip on his soldier. Can't wait to see how they work things out!
| lovedwardalways chapter 7 . 2/20/2013
Sorry I did not review every chapter cause I just kept reading not wanting to stop long enough to review that's how good it was I was almost late for work this morning I was so engrossed in it. I loved it. How he kept forgetting about the cat. Edward was so cute all nervous about jasper not wanting a relationship even after helping to buy the house. I knew Edward would have the perfect penis when Marcus first asked. Carlie is just adorable. I hope you consider a sequel to this.
| CentauRita chapter 7 . 1/18/2013
Edward 'plugs' me everytime ;}...The loan ranger and his Goldie Locks...much better than a tonto, though.
Your boyz are so cute and with a 'pussy' too, that's gotta be novel**smirks** ;}
| CentauRita chapter 6 . 1/18/2013
Oooh...painting the Edward...red!
| CentauRita chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
A bit? you say...as I giggle, helplessly ;}
| CentauRita chapter 4 . 1/18/2013
Totally enjoying ALCL...however the countdown at the end of each chappie...not so much!
| CentauRita chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Ugh! Really? A whole month...Jasper! You waited a whole month before contacting Edward? For shame.
| CentauRita chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
| CentauRita chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
EAM,Jr…at your service...**waggling my eyebrows**…or, here to service...YOU, Mr. Whitlock ;}
| sugaray chapter 7 . 1/17/2013
Wow I really can't believe I had not come across this story before, I loved loved it! Jasper was so cute and Edward with his age insecurities was endearing 3. Will definitely be reading this again and again in future...great job. XOXO!
| Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDraco chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Chamillionaire, seriously? xD
I sniggered too, when I read that, :P
I adore this story so far, but Jasper overacts more than a PMSing Kardashian sister, lol.
I have to go bed now because I've got college in 7 hours and I haven't even finished my course work due in tomorrow, :S
(Evil writers getting me hooked on sexy slash stories *folds arms and pouts*... this is the 7th one I've read this weekend, :O)
| BaerAndSheep chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
Holy hell! I think their lovemaking in the attic was one of the most erotic sex scenes Ive ever read. Its leaving me quite breathless.
I like a lot that they are not perfect and that not everything they are doing is perfect as well. Like the scene on the bike. Its trial and error and just like it would be in real life and that makes it so much more interesting to read.
The end was a bit rushed. It was over very abrupt, I think it wouldve just taken a few more sentences to ease a little bit more gentle into the end. But maybe thats just me.
I really enjoyed reading your story and I am going to check out your other stories as well, I like your writing style. Thanks so much for sharing!
| BaerAndSheep chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
I enjoy so much how irrational Jasper is. He is always full of surprises and I love it.
I totally understand Pussy watching the two of them. Wouldnt we all?
| BaerAndSheep chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
He forgot to shed the condom! Get outta here!
OMG, I laughed to hard, I had tears running down my face, when the two of them removed it. Yeah, thats not nice, I imagine it to be painful, but its so hilarious!
| BaerAndSheep chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
I like the way Edward says he is coming home at the end. It sounds like he says "Im coming home to you".
*SIGH*, so sweet!