|Reviews for The Pursuit of Happiness|
| eenayde chapter 17 . 10/22/2015
Jesus. Gawd. That ending line was more than freaking PERF. ECT. ION.
Words cannot describe the love I feel for this. I don't wanna read chap. 18. I don't want it to end. It was too fabulous. I mean every single word I say. Your writing is fab. Role model. Awesome.
It was funny, soo interesting, beautiful, disturbing, angsty (my fav) and heartbreaking. You seriously broke my heart. Broke it. I felt da pain.
But anyways, I loved it so much and please never ever give up writing because you are awesome at it and I love your stories. I can't believe this was your first AmeCan tho. It's too fantabulous. Soooo fantabulous.
Okay I think I got my point across. Love. :) Awesome.
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/22/2015
Wow. This really hits hard. AmaZING.
| Peace chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
Why is this so freaking addictive? WHY?! HOOOW?! So amazing. It's something I never want to end.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/21/2015
God this is breaking my heart in ten billion ways. It's brilliant. I love it.
| Usernames.are.masks chapter 18 . 10/3/2015
This is one of the best AmeCan fics I have ever read. I can't even articulate how devastated I am that it's over.
| TheHauntedPencil chapter 18 . 8/14/2015
Oh my god- So this is really old and I don't think you'll even get this but wow I read this story all in one sitting and I laughed and cried and felt so many things- This was written so beautifully I only wish that I could do the same thing. It's perfect.
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/23/2015
| Larisya chapter 18 . 5/2/2015
Thank you for the happy ending and the whole story! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Merci mille fois. It was awesome, and I loved it.
| Larisya chapter 16 . 5/2/2015
I really hope there's a happy ending. Last time I read a story where one of the last chapters was called "Happily Ever After" it turned out really badly...
| Larisya chapter 14 . 5/2/2015
God DA*N it! Is "Kirkland" really a syrup? I guess Costco? Do they sell syrup with their brand? Also, poor Mattie...
| Larisya chapter 13 . 5/2/2015
OK, therapist has Arthur-y sounding dialogue-though that could just as easily be that I'm thinking about it. Though, last chapter he seemed to know what Matthew looked like, and if Monika gave out that kind of info-well, that's just friggin' creepy.
| Larisya chapter 12 . 5/2/2015
My knee-jerk reaction to things like mentions of afternoon tea is apparently Arthur. I immediately assumed Alfred was talking to Arthur, but then I realized he was talking to a therapist, so...no. I don't know any syrup brands. Other than, like, Hershey's chocolates syrup.
| snownoor chapter 14 . 9/28/2014
wwhhooaaa! that was a great twist! Arthur as the therapist :) you are AWESOME at writing!
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/6/2014
I love the story. Seriously. I've never expected a more awesome (like, Prussia-awesome) fanfic than this one out of 18 chapters. 18 chapters. Wow. Nice ending, by the way. Franklin Williams-Jones. Catchy. And Arthur was Alfred's therapist all along? My gods, THAT was certainly unexpected. Oh yeah, can't forget the 'Oh God Al-mighty' part; I admit, I was a little bit slow, but when I read the next chapter, I was cracking up. Really. Thanks for writing this.
| Xeric Truant chapter 15 . 7/12/2013
Aha, Matthew messed up on the "best friend's name" test! In the previous chapters, he was referred to as "Alfred Franklin Jones" but Matthew said "Alfred Fredrick Jones". Clever.