Really like this. Hope you plan on continuing

Your use and repetition of the nursery rhyme to show Hermione trying to distance herself is really good. And so sad! And you plant a tiny hint of Draco looking for a response, although he has far far to go to redeem himself from this painful time. And no one at the order is really looking at Hermione, other than to pat her on the head. So Draco, for all his fault, is really the only one who does see her. Great start.

Really excited when I checked my mail and saw this new story! Read it and is loving it! I salute you Hermione! You've got guts! Though sad about how she was treated for the first few times, it's getting better! Do update! Will be waiting for the next chapter! And also, advance happy birthday!

Pretty darn good!

YAY! FINALLY ANOTHER STORY! PLEASE, IF THERE IS MORE TO THIS STORY, UPDATE SOON!

I love Draco and Hermione pairings! I cannot wait for the second chapter, thank you very much for sharing it! I do hope it has a happy ending! And I wish you a happy birthday and hope that you will have a great day :)

Wow this is definitely something I've never considered Dramione wise but I like the plot so far. Please write more soon.

Happy birthday! and i hope you have time to write more i live your stories and you are one of my favorite authors!

Wow.

For one thing, you write smut so very, very well. But this...this is so heartbreaking. The position Hermione is in here, and at the end when her body begins working against her...I've known that feeling, and it is just so difficult to get through and later, to get over. It can take a long time to really trust your body again once you realize that it can be manipulated against you. I wonder at how this can possibly be resolved in just one more chapter, but most definitely look forward to reading it.

Excellent, as usual. Your writing never ceases to amaze me, darling.

JarethGirl