Reviews for Thirty Times Lucky |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is one of my favorite fics. I'd love to get to see Draco's POV though, this is great as is, as well as your other works. I hope you never stop writing, be it Dramione fics or your own books. I'm a fan! please keep them coming ️ |
![]() ![]() I never thought I would find rape (well, dub-con) induced Stockholm syndrome to be romantic but you somehow managed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a relief. Draco sacrificed a lot for her and the Order. I’m glad he came back to her and she accepted him. Well, she did have feelings for him along the way. Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feels kinda sad that they’re just using each other to fulfill a job/task they have to do. :( Like it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh my gosh, thank you for this. What a perfect wrap up. It started so twisted and wrong, and then the way you brought everything together was just - *chef's kiss* - masterful. I love how much we didn't know, how much you kept secret. I love that Draco held so much more power than Hermione (and we readers) knew, and didn't exploit it until she had given her consent (dubious though it may have been). I love that he'd been in love with her the whole time. That he'd never had it in him to be a Death Eater. That Lucius, monster that he was, still had enough human left in him to protect his son. Really, really well done here. A full and complex story told in two chapters. Brava. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this on the recommendation of a friend, and holy whoa what a first chapter. The desperation of Hermione's situation is so clear. If she is the only one keeping the Order on its feet, then she doesn't have much of a choice, does she? Another job in a climate of hatred and fear that would pay enough to allow her to feed and clothe 20-odd people? Her rationale is brutal, cold, but accurate, and I think you sold it to us well. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very dfferent and entertaining premise. I have a love-hate relationship with short stories. I love that I can finish and enjoy them real fast and I hate that they get over so soon! I really, really enjoyed this little piece. Do consider a complimentary piece with Draco's PoV |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. The slow progression of their relationship is done well at just the right pace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best short fics: short and sweet and a little dark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Twisted, sexy, lovely! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of wish it wasn't a short story but a longer one with Draco's point of view as well. I love Dramione's where the characters are actually in true form. Not the whole Draco secretly in love with HG thing but rather a slow-build of relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story! Very well written. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |