|Reviews for All That Matters|
| SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Thia was a really nice one-shot; I love the bond that Bill and Charlie share and Molly's reaction to Bill getting married; but I especially like how you mention Ginny dancing on Bill's feet; that's juar an adorable part of the story. Nicely done I liked it; great job.
| Clarinetier chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I cannot even begin to explain how much I love this piece. Deep and masterful but still under 600 words! Outstanding job, truly. :-)
| Queenie's Broken Heart chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Oh this is lovely! You create such a sense of family in this piece and you capture your prompts very well in Bill's character. I like the title 'All That Matters' because even though it's set during wartime, it's so obvious that Bill is completely focused on Fleur. And the last few lines are particularly poignant, especially "Bill finally found peace in the time of war". You show that his scars are only skin deep. Very nice story :)
| Mr Bellatrix Lestrange chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
I think that the best part of this is that it actually gives some depth to their relationship. It makes it more realistic, and more three-dimensional to the reader, because we really know so little about them- yet here they are, happy together, prepared to be married. I was hoping for a tad more description, maybe her dress or the setting, but actually the no-description made me believe that the looks and appearance WEREN'T important, which was exactly what you wanted your Bill to believe. That said, you did a lovely job of conveying your point that way, and it is very true that when in love, looks don't matter. I see how Bill would be worried over such a thing though, because he seems the type. Your Charlie was lovely, and the whole thing was very, "family." Nice job.
| barefoot and buckwild chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Awesome, I loved it! (:
| reminiscent-afterthought chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Cute. Everyone seems to get cold feet when they're getting married. It's always cute. :)
They'll start Bill's wedding without him. Hehe. That will be a sight to see. Who's Fleur supposed to say her wedding vows too? Lol.
"shaking too bad for him" - reads a little weirdly, but otherwise, well written too. Good job.
| lella7 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I love the relationship between Bill and Charlie here, it was very sweet and brilliantly written. I thought you could perhaps have made a little more of the Charlie POV ending part as it was a really lovely idea, but seemed a little bit rushed to me. I really enjoyed it though :)
| WeasleySeeker chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Wow, that was beautiful! I love Bill/Fleur, but I really did like this take on it, with the ending from Charlie's perspective. I loved their sibling-ness, that was adorable, and his parents' reactions were great. I especially loved the bit at the end: "And it's the first time that Charlie realizes that Fleur may possibly be the best thing that ever happened to Bill because Bill finally found peace in the time of war." I love how they manage to find happiness amidst all the destruction that's happening. It made me a little sad when I remembered what happens afterwards in the book, haha. Lovely writing! :)
| lowi chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Gosh, this is so beautiful, and makes me so happy. I love BillFleur as a pairing, always have, and even though I've never read much about Charlie and Bill as brothers, I find them really interesting, and the way you wrote them here was absolutely gorgeous.
It didn't hit me until I had finished it, that, of course, the day will end not as good, and that made me of course very sad. :) But still, the happiness, that peace in the middle of the war (as you so beautifully worded it in the ending), was pictured really wonderfully by you.
A gorgeous story, absolutely!
| xThe Painted Lady chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Awww, I loved this. :) It's so cute and I loved how you had Charlie and Bill acting in this story. I loved how you portrayed their sibling relationship. I thought it was done pretty well and I loved how Charlie was talking to Bill about Fleur. Granted, I've never been all that fond of Fleur. I've always found her just so annoying and just, plastic. xD I don't know! But I've always loved her relationship with Bill. It seemed real and I love how you portrayed that here. I think that was done pretty well. :) And how you incorporated the meaning of the color blue was also really nice. I just loved the ending!
"And it's the first time that Charlie realizes that Fleur may possibly be the best thing that ever happened to Bill because Bill finally found peace in the time of war." That was my favourite line! :3 I liked how you portrayed Bill's feeling about her. It was just so sweet! I really liked this!
Nice job! :)
| dontyoucrynomore chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Aww, that's so sweet. :3 I've never really read much BillFleur, but I do think that they are an adorable couple-I developed a whole lot of respect for Fleur after she went all "So what if he is scarred?". I think that you did a great job here, but I think that the ending line is a bit...awkward. I mean, the sentiment is awesome, and I was like "That's so sweet!", but it was still a bit oddly phrased. Anyway, other than that, great job! I really enjoyed reading this. :)
| The Original Horcrux chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
OH MY GOD I'M CRYING!
That was so unbelievably sweet. That little bit at the end just made me lose it. The brotherly bond between Bill and Charlie is really well written and when I think about it, Bill and Charlie are probably the closest to each other out of all their brothers. Cause Charlie was the first sibling that Bill had so they would be really close.
There wasn't much that I could pick up in the way of spelling mistakes and/or grammar errors and if there was I didn't notice because this was too amazing.
| Lady Phoenix Fire Rose chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
I really liked this little scene between Charlie and Bill. It was really nice to read about their brotherly affection for one another, especially before Bill's wedding. I think that you did excellently with this. :D
| keeptheotherone chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Aw, this is very sweet! I like the easy relationship between the brothers, and the great detail of Ginny dancing on her biggest brother's feet (I'm assuming you mean that in the little-girl-learning-to-dance way, and not the clumsy way!), and most especially the last line :) Absolutely, there's no one else like Fleur ;) Watch your dialogue tags; if they're an actual sentence (e.g. "Bill laughs weakly") use a period instead of a comma.
A delightful story-good job!
| Someone aka Me chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This is lovely. It's such a short moment, but you really descrbed every aspect of it really well. Bill's nervousness, especially. The fluffy, brotherly Bill/Charlieness is utterly lovely :D For some reason, I have an obsession with ties, and the image of Charlie helping Bill with his just plain made me smile :D