|Reviews for ThirtyThree Percent|
| MeatBunFighter chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I like how you're the first one who ever posted a fanfic for Accel World. I read this a bunch of times, actually. But I never had the balls to write a review for you. I don't know why. I must have been lazy.
But enough about the excuses! I love you how you love this pairing. 3
Extreme bonus points for you.
Anyway, Olive Sharp, huh? I really like that name. It sounds super cool.
I liked the battle sequence and the words you used throughout it. "Dive-bomb kick," "High-jump," "Charged her like a bull..." "Small like ants..." Yeah. Great phrases and stuff.
For the next segment... I saw a huge emphasis of friendship between Kuroyuki and Haru. Was that on purpose, by the way? I'm not really complaining. I really liked the interaction! Seriously! I kind of wished for more of a romantic scene...
Then again, their love-love scenes are subtle and stuff. I can see you tried hard to keep them in character so I applaud you for that.
I really thought the usage of 33% was clever. Mega coolio, miss!
Of course, there's a lack of description for certain things, like Olive Sharp's blade and stuff, but I can overlook it.
I thought you did a nice job and hopefully, you'll keep writing and keep striving to improve.
| WhitePantherLance chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Absolutely adorable. I like the ending a lot, too. "You only get thirty three percent of it."
| MiyukiShinodaMindFreak chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
| Thunder Tyant 77 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Sir that is a great fanfic you got there I thought it was funny how he only got 33% of the parfait
| kamishiro kaze tsurugi aruji chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
nice but too short mostly it looks like copied and altered a bit though u should add OCs and disclaimers
| kurushi chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I thought I'd never find Accel World fic, especially nothing this sweet! I really enjoyed reading it, thank you.
| Elia950 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Eheh! Thisis nice! Accel world is great! Good oneshot!