Reviews for The Vest
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Aww I Loved It.! It'll Be Amazing If You Did Continue It.! Just Imaging Tenzin's Face Whne He Finds Out It's A Certain Street Kid's Vest;) Well Like Before I Love Your Story And I Hope You Continue It:)-Abstract
Marrow365 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Oh that is sooooo cute! Continue please I would love to know what happens next :)
Ninjafish15 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
aww thats sweet. i really dont care if u continue its up to u but i think the storys great as it is
vinchaan chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
pls... make... more... chapters... pls!

oh, and, really good :D
nacho5 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Southern Summer Nights chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Nyah! So cute! Please continue!
Mademoiselle Hydrangea chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
This was too cute! Absolutely loved this XD

bewilder22 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
tsk, tsk, tsk... Jinora, how could you have been so obtuse? Ha-ha! Cute story!

Brooke Alex
Midnight4568 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This is a really good story! However, I noticed that every sentence that does not include quotes starts with a pronoun. Namely "I," "He," and "We."

The end is funny, because of Tenzin. XD
Green Sirene chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
You were right! I loved it! D Keep up the awesome work!
RoNfOrThEwIn chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
You have to continue!
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