I'll admit it now, I haven't read this is in a while. But I'm always up for angst and I kind of like how it got happier and happier and then BAM, she's dead. And you put Toph in (it's funny because we both threw her in). :D Your OCs also didn't irritate me whcih is always a plus, because in most cases it only requires an OC to say more than two lines to annoy me. :D And I liked the discription, it's hard to describe why, but it almost makes it more solemn in a way, like you know something bad is going to happen. Or I'm just imagining it, either way! :D

Interesting story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D

...Friendship and tragedy, indeed.

Nice story you have there! I have always loved Zukos Au's and since Zukos isn't the scarred boy with the estranged relation with his father I suppose it is...

I really liked all the characters and I have to say that Fam was adorable I couldn't help but imagine her like the youngest girl in Despicable me :D

So.. Really loved your story.. I was going more for a happy ending but eh..