Reviews for The Coming Storm
CrimsonatSunset chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Job well done! I really liked reading it. Keep going! :D
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Very good. You did the first person narration very well, and I liked how this story was set up. I wouldn't be surprised if Finitevus does try again.
Zails chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Very interesting...its cool though.
xyzgirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
let me be the first to say 'interesting' i loved it!