Reviews for Prey and Pack
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
RoseDreamer87 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I love this story! I wish there was more. Great job!
Rosmund Chadwick chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Oh wow. This is LOVELY! Is there any way you would consider making this more than a one-shot? Maybe Riddick traveling with Jack instead of dropping her off with Imam?
T.V programs rule chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Great story! LOVED it! thanks for writing it :D xxxxx
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
this is really good but you should continue it
Sam chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
This is really good. Keep writing.
Riddicknodefeat chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
really good, you should add another chapter
AnimeXOXOlover chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I like it :)
Joani chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I like this analysis of the two female characters (it's a bit unfair to call Jack a woman at this point in the story) from Riddick's point of view. I also enjoyed the brief wonder Riddick has about Jack's claim of never having lost faith.

I liked this a lot; it's one of the stories that I enjoy coming back for a re-read.
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Well done! I like the dual nature perspectives, and the animal understanding.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
It would be a crime for you to not make a sequel to this. I'd had having to call the writing police 'cause an awesome story like this didn't get a sequel.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Nice. One of the best stories I've read and that is saying something something considring I've read over a thousand stories. Keep up the good work.
Casperace13 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Nice! I loved the introspect.
crysbit chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I really like that way you've separated the two halves of his personality and given his reasoning for Carolyn and Jack. The language seems a bit tame for Riddick, but the story is great.
plzprettyplz chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Holy crap! Me likey! Very original plz add more! Pretty plz?
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