|Reviews for Stasis|
| Draconis Kitten Sweetie chapter 5 . 12/25/2013
BACK FROM THE DEAD TO REVIEW YOUR MARVELOUS STORY, DARLING! I'm excited. Can you tell? I'm just going to re-read the chapter and review whenever I feel necessary. This may take awhile.
Man, barely one hundred words in and your vocabulary is stunning. As it always is, but I digress.
Wonderful descriptions too... Link's electric blue eyes, Ike over-dramatizing the situation (though, who can blame him?), it's all wonderful. If I had a vocabulary like yours, you'd be getting better reviews.
'YOUR-MERE-PRESCENCE-IS-ENOUGH' No. I have no reason to comment on this. Except every time I read it I start to laugh and giggle uncontrollably and I can't tell why. I enjoy it. And it was non-verbal too, which is even better, don't know why. I love this. And then when he refers to himself and Marth as Mom and Dad.
I love how straightforward he is with Ike! 'So you like Marth.'. It's not even a question! It's a stated fact! It's fabulous.
Ike's crush is adorable. I've said it before, I'll say it again. And let me just say, I could feel the metaphorical sweat-drop rolling down the back of my head when Link says "So I have an idea...'
I found the scene with Ike trying to wake Marth up beyond adorable. I can totally relate to Marth there; I'm IMPOSSIBLE to get up. He has a reason to be all sleepy and stay there though, what with the mercenary all close to him and stuff... X3
'I... I've been talking with Link...' AHHHH HIS PANIC AT THAT STATEMENT WAS SO CUTE I CAN'T EVEN BECAUSE LINK KNOWS AND HINTED AT THE FACT THAT MARTH HAS A CRUSH ON HIM AND MARTH THOUGHT THAT LINK TOLD IKE AND AHHHH. Okay. That's my fangirling, I must apologize for it.
AND THEN WHEN HE COMPLETELY AVOIDED THE TOPIC TO GET TO DINNER AHHHH.
'questionably platonic, romantic, AND sexual tension-filled'. I love this description. It basically explains their relationship without explaining their relationship in a rather entertaining way. Though why Ike can pick up on that and now Marth's affections, I'll never know.
That ending scene was kinda sad... Ike, I am disappointed in the fact that your answer was to take a sip of alcohol. TEL HIM YOU LOVE HIM YOU FABULOUS MAN. (I am sorry for that as well.)
So, I'm sorry my review lacks the quality of a nitty-picky English teacher, I just kind of ended up fangirling unintelligibly, but don't I always? I'll try to review better, I swear!
Kitten (More reviewing to come!)
| Histeria chapter 5 . 10/19/2013
I must say, I had to read the other chapters once again because, honestly, it's been a while. I thought you were going to delete it.
That being said, Zelda's characterization in stasis is a surprise. Very different, I hope to see more about her.
Also, I was getting a little worried about the pace. As in, progress is very slow but realistic, but we know so little about what Marth thinks...
Anyway, I am curious, wondering about the direction this is taking. Keep it up!
| Psychic Prince chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
This story is just too awesome I can't even - /cue dramatic faint/
Ahem. AHEM. Cough.
Sorry, needed to get the feels out of my system. Anyways, I loved this chapter! I don't know what it is about your writing, but I've loved it ever since I laid my (stalker) eyes on your stories.
In actuality, I read this not long after you posted. It was just in the morning and I had to go to school, so I couldn't leave a proper review. Well, here it is now. My (im)proper review. /SPARKLE
Of course, you always add that slight, hinted, and sometimes hidden in a somewhat-obvious-spot sense of humor. Loving it all the time, my dear IkeMarth fan.
Now that I think about it, I'm not even sure if this review makes any sense. OTL. That's just me.
And, since I am perfectly incapable of writing a proper review with critiques and all of that junk, I will say this one thing once more:
(I) LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES. KEEP IT UP. MY FEELS DEMAND IT (okay, not really. No pressure, man... But seriously, keep it up..!)
| Draconis Kitten Sweetie chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
Again, please forgive this nutty fan for her sporadic reviewing habits. I realized I only reviewed the first three chapters of this story (and didn't review very well, mind you) so the only logical course of action was to re-read the entire thing so I could write a well-informed review fitting for such a wonderful piece. And you get the whole hoo-rah all over again.
Need I even say that this is well-written or that I still use a dictionary when I read this? Or do you just know that by now? I figure i say it enough, considering it's true every time. Since I did not read through my other reviews that I left here, I might be re-stating a few things.
First off, this is just adorable. Ike's crush is adorable. The fact that Marth probably likes him back (well he sure acts like he does! X3) is adorable. Mike is adorable. And I love the way you portray the two, Ike's still entertaining (especially when Roy comes in), and Marth is still quiet and adorable. And not just because Marth is always adorable. You can almost -feel- Ike's crush for yourself, because who hasn't been there? You've described the crush so well, it feels real. this whole thing feels real.
And all the little things that indicate that Marth probably likes him back stir up a few 'aw's and giggles from this fangirl.
So, I kind of forgot what else I was going to say... Sorry...
I'd tell you to get the hell back to fanfiction, but you are, you're just not updating this story. So I'll tell you that I'm sure quite a few people would appreciate an update!
Best of luck to you and hope to see an update soon,
| Milo chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
(Whoops, damn mousepad hit post) -description. But what really got me was the smooth flow. I love how the events themselves may seem bland and ordinary (none of those cliche dates but rather, a simple meeting at a coffeehouse, apartment, campus, or even laundry mat) yet your words bring hem to life. Your stories really keep my heart anxious to see the development, and bring a huge smile to my face when everything works out. By the way, out of all the SSBB docs I've ever read to date, I think your characterization by far the best. The subtleties in Marth's elegance and Ike's boyish demeanour are brilliant. Thanks again for writing these, and kudos for making this reluctant one review.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
I just have to say that I don't usually comment (yes, I'm one of those blasphemous devils who just lurk and leave), but all your stories from Mechanism to Momentum really left me in awe. Your writing style is incredible with creative analogies and descri
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2013
Will you be continuing this?
| Draconis Kitten Sweetie chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
"I had my reasons." MEANING HE TOTALLY LOVES IKE TOO AND DIDN'T WANT LINK TO GIVE HIM THE WRONG IDEA. NYEHEHEHEHEHE.
Okay, sorry, conspiracy theory over.
Oooooh, Ike's got to stay with Marth for the weeeeeekeeeeeend! This is going to be run to read.
| Draconis Kitten Sweetie chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Aw damn. "He likes me." Poor Ike. Now he knows what could happen if he tells Marth he likes him.
Ike's crush is again portrayed wonderfully, I've thought that same things about my crush, whether or not to tell them or not. We've totally all been there.
Great chapter again, can't wait to continue! Hope you update soon!
| Draconis Kitten Sweetie chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Oh no, poor Ike...! Again, you seriously described the crush as one of the best I've ever read about. I can totally relate to Ike in about a thousand ways. I feel for you!
Again, I really love your stories, and these are some of the few AUs I enjoy reading!
Come back and update, I noticed you haven't been around since 2012! (*is probably guilty of the same thing*)
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/26/2013
YES PLEASE CONTINUE THIS ;A;
| iChocoLove chapter 4 . 1/10/2013
I'm quite enjoying your writing style & the story; please do continue ;w;
| Madam Imagine chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
i love this story! please update more!
| DyingCollegeStud chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
If I dont get another chapter, I might actually die in university. This is amazing, its seriously keeping me going :) Thanks for writing it!
| MonokuroNee chapter 4 . 9/25/2012