Reviews for The Kitten and Coyote
StrainAsylum chapter 9 . 7/4/2013
This is really very good. Easing Sebastian into relationship mode and Kurt opening his doors. I would very much have loved to see that Cheerios thing happen, also. And I'm very glad that Mike & Tina and 'Tana and Britt...oh and Puck are in there for Kurt. I'd hope that Artie would be, as well? And sorry that Mercedes isn't. I actually think she WOULD be.
StrainAsylum chapter 7 . 7/4/2013
Very enjoyable! Your writing and characterizations remind me of one of my favorite fic writers, gleefulmusings. That being said, there are the frequent small grammatical errors that interrupt the flow, but the story and writing are enjoyable enough to work through them. I'm certain that most people don't even notice, in fact.
StrainAsylum chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
This is cute and snarky, by turns. Very entertaining.

By the way, it's "dads" (plural), not "dad's" (which is an item belonging to a SINGLE dad possessive). And "threw" something into the hamper, instead of walking "through" a door. (Yes, English sucks. It's a bastardized hodgepodge of a language, with Latin and Greek roots, Germanic grammar and everything else tossed into a pot, then stirred).
StrainAsylum chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
Very, very interesting and engaging. I love the characterizations so far.
StrainAsylum chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
I'm loving this! Loved Kurt in the Cheerios (however briefly we were allowed to enjoy it). Loved the fire on his face when he and Mercedes did 4 Minutes, and would have LOVED to see the Ceiline Dion medley. Too bad RIB too him off not only the football team but the Cheerios. I would have LOVED to see Kurt throw that right hook. The chemistry here is pretty good and the story is very engaging. Looking forward to reading more.

There seemed to be more small errors, mostly confusing "to" (going TO a place) and "too" (also), but I haven't noticed any plural and possessive confusions, yet (the Andersons the Anderson family members; the Anderson's something owned by Anderson).
StrainAsylum chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
This is very good! And, yes, I hate Blaine when he's been drinking. Oddly, more and more little things come to mind that I find that I dislike about Blaine, though I liked him a lot in s2. In s3, it's about 50-50. Sebastian is being surprising; I'd been liking Kurtbastian and Kam (Hevans) combos more lately (though I really would have liked to give Adam a shot). Well done in the writing aspects, with few obvious errors.
Calmzone1 chapter 22 . 7/2/2013
I think this is one of my favourite KurtBastian stories besides Michel's List and a couple of others. Hope you get to finish it :)
ivyquen chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
have to go to sleep but cant its 2:30 am and cant sleepbecause the story and plot wont let go
macs ace chapter 21 . 6/24/2013
I have read this over and over so many times. Its got to be my favourite fic. I hope you can update it one day soon. I'd love to read the finished fic. Please update when you can!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
;-; that was a beautiful ending... I love when people change for Love... YES LOVE! I know story love when I see it... that's right...
but siriously, that was some amazing writing, and Santana and Britt was spot on... also Rachel much to my annoyence...
BuzBeeMags chapter 20 . 6/22/2013
WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK OF FUCKING FUCKS WAS THAT?
THAT WAS THE MOST CREEPY THING I HAVE READ ALL YEAR! FUCK MAN!
AND YOU MADE THE FIRST UNPROTECTED SEX CHAPTER FROM BALINES POV! WTF!?
THIS IS FREAKING ME OUT AND I DON'T HOPE FOR ANYMORE CHAPTERS FROM BLAINES POV! HE'S TO FUCKING SCARY AND CREEPY!
AND YET THIS WAS FUCKING PERFECT AGAIN!
YOU ARE DRIVING ME CRAZY!
but fuck man... you make Blaine sound like a kidnapper ._.
But Kurt and Sebastian is so cute... Sebastian got tested and Kurt trusted him ;-;
Imma just go die in my own tears...
BUT FUCK MAN! I'M STILL SHAKING FROM THAT CREEPINESS!
I don't like there only being 2 chapters left when this story is not finished and was last updated a year ago ;-;
BuzBeeMags chapter 19 . 6/22/2013
YOU ARE FUCKING KILLING ME! LIKE I SAID IN MY FUCKING LAST REVIEW! I DIDN'T THINK IT COULD GET ANYMORE PERFECT, BUT YET FUCKING AGAIN IT DID, AND I WAS WRONG!
Seb being insecure towards why Kurt loves him... Fucking yes that is so fucking great... it's like reading porn... emotinal reading porn!
And the fucking eating stuff with Kurt?! WHERE DID IT COME FROM! NEVER WOULD HAVE GUESSED IT! IT CAME OUT OF FUCKING NO WHERE, BUT STILL FUCKING FIT THE STORY PERFECTLY! THERE WHERE HINTS, BUT NOT HINTS WE TAKE NOTE OF, JUST STORY MOMENTS WE READ THROUGH BEFORE WE NEED THEM! FUCK MAN...
Aww and Seb and Puck... very nice talk ;-; very awesome... AND FINNALLY SOMEONE ELSE KNOWS! AGAIN!
WHAT ABOUT BRITT?!
BuzBeeMags chapter 18 . 6/22/2013
OMG OMG OMG! I feel liek some dick head is coming for Kurt and Seb is gonna be either all lost and can't find Kurt or a very possesive boyfreind not taking shit form anybody...
AND BAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I sisriously doubted that this story could keep suprising me and keep getting better, but then you fucking throw the sex talk into the story, and I feel like I'm reading an amazing story, while learning some fucking useful shit for once... school ain't very useful when it comes to how the fuck society works... Glee, other TV'shows, Movies, Books and Tumblr. have taught me more than school, my parent and especially my teachers ever will... that is probably why there is so much bullying... the kids and adults do not know shit about the real world? hmmmm, Maybe... but anyways... perfect...again
BuzBeeMags chapter 17 . 6/22/2013
OKAY OKAY OKAY OKAY OKAY! BAHAHAHAHAH! Fuck Sue will always be so crazy that crazy ain't enough for her.
But that Puckurt moment, was so awesome. I loved seeing that, and it was well written again!
but you know what I love most about your story... you throw random things in it, but still makes it work... like how do you do that?
Like in one of the other chapters you threw a Mike thought in, even thought he just enetered the room, and was never mentioned again in that chapter, but it worked so well... I'm fucking confused ._. how did it work?
but anyways, still perfect writing :)
But you know what would be awesome... a moment where Kurt is falling apart or just letting down some of his defenses... Like really bawling his eyes out in Seb's chest... that would be so great. Really good character devoleovment.
And that ND know what Blaine did... they need to know... please
BuzBeeMags chapter 16 . 6/22/2013
I need to say this... I really apreciate you tno being one of those who use a whole chapter just to describe how beautiful and big one of the characters cock is...
AND AGAIN! PURE PERFECTION! LIKE OMG! DESCRIBING THE SCENE FOR ME ENOUGH TO IMAGINE, BUR NOT GET BORED WITH TO MUCH INFORMATION! AND AGAIN BAM! SEX OUT OF NO WHERE!
FUCK YOU ARE GONNA BE THE DEATH OF ME WITH THIS STORY!
AND OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG T_T THE L WORD FINALLY GOT OUT!
AND THEY DIDN'T FUCK EACHOTHER OR HAVE SEX GOD DAMNIT! SEB SAID MAKED LOVE!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
I really hope I finish this before I have to leave for a 18 birthday party... imagine me reading this from my phone...
I'll just start giggeling out of no where, scream of joy, fucking make dying whale noises... probably also cry and yelll ._. maan... what are you doing to me...
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