|Reviews for In the End|
| I am Shibuya's Composer chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
OMG I FREAKING FORGOT TO REVIEW THIS STORY OMG IM SO SORRY
And I'm falling asleep.
" Q: So, Vanitas, your latest, greatest, record-breaking hit, The Lights Go Down. It's about meeting a fan during a concert and falling in love with her, right? There are rumors that it's based on a real experience. Is that true? Are you in love with a fan?
A: Hell no! (laughs) She hates my music."
That part gets me everytime. I loved how they met. Number One Fan is my favorite character by far! (?) HAHA HELL NO XDDDD
And the end...omg...omg... Speechless. Ends so perfect that I could not describe. You. .you... Why you are so amazing? I adore you!
| Le Neko-neko chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Shit T_T You just have yourself another fan :"
| Shiori Yomu chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I read this before, I just wasn't able to review, but not I shall! Haha! This is absolutely wonderful! I like your VanQua fics! :D
| Script Savage chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I don't know how you do it...I wish I could write like this.
This fic reminds me of "Where She Went" by Gayle Foreman...and since that's one of my all-time favorite books, kudos to you for reminding of it!
There's something about the angst in this story that makes me want to keep coming back to it-you write Vanitas really well.
Keep up the great work!
| E d e n chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
What - the -
The title, the 'End,' the words, and the cycle of their relationship and the story itself . . .
It was all so perfectly planned out. Obviously you put much thought into this "simple" one-shot but I feel like you've accomplished so much more compared to some who cannot even do that in a multi-chaptered story.
And I /always/ appreciate writers who put actual thoughts into their work.
Of course, the only complaint I have is the lack of snapshots of their relationship- you gave us the beginning and the end, but not quite so much of the middle. But that's a very, very minor complaint because there's only so much one can ask for in a one-shot. You managed to not only show us the broad scale of their relationship in the flashbacks, but also in the present time too.
Although, when I read the summary I was kind of expecting a darker tinge here. You -did- kind of elaborated on the kind of darkness he inspired in her, but that part seemed a bit too vague and hazy to give much weight to so maybe that's the only part I think that could've been tinkered with a bit. Other than that, this story was just su-perrrb.
| OnixBlood chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Omg i really liked this! I actually want to hear more from this story! :DD
| socrazyimsane chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Great story, Vanitas last name saint doesn't seem to fit quite right, yet is somehow perfect for him in this.
| hopping chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
it was soooo nice again! u shud make another chapter for this! you know, i really liked vanitas from the start and when you made vanitas and aqua a pair, it totally surprised me! but now, i do really like them as a pair cause of their personalities, hahaha dont stop making love stories about aqua and vanitas! hahahaha
| Kiryn chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Buh. Duuuuuuuuuude. The AquVan awesomeness here is killing me. Seriously, my inner fangirl just keeled over.
You just have such an amazing talent for writing AquVan though, you know? Like, a seriously amazing talent. You manage to capture everything about this pairing in oneshots like this. The fact that, no matter what Aqua thinks, she really DOESN'T take Vanitas's bullsh*t, the fact that that's what always initially draws him to her-even in canon, a little bit-and even down to the way that Vanitas is totally a person who always makes direct eye contact in conversations, and then how HE SAID THAT HE WOULD WAIT...just, holy hell, this is all so freaking amazing and in-character, and I just want to grab these two knuckleheads and squeeze them tight, because they totally DON'T seem like they'd work out, like they'd bring out all the bad in each other, and yet...somehow, THEY WORK.
I'm kind of curious to know who Number One Fan is, though.
ANYWAY, back to AquVan, I love their second meeting so much, and I totally laughed at the taxi driver recognizing Vanitas, and the way you can practically hear Aqua thinking that Van's the world's biggest weirdo. And how, in that interview, Vanitas is all, "No, she hates my music."
This is just all precious and adorable, and I love it like I love every other AquVan story that you write. What can I say, you just NAIL this ship, dear. :D
| xXxGothicButterflySpiritxXx chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
I was so happy when I saw this on my inbox! I started reading this on my phone in class and almost got taken away in every class! XD
I liked this, it was well written(like all your stories) and very in character. It's actually because of your Vanqua stories that I started to like this couple so much. I even made a Terrqua vs Vanqua AMV since I seriously can't decide who I like more!
| Enlyien chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
I think my heart is about to burst out of my chest, yet again!
You ALWAYS do this to me!
| WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Wow, it's so good to see another update from you! I was starting to worry there for a sec that I might never get to read something from you again...
Never thought I would say this, but Vanitas and I have one thing in common: I have the very same stress ball. XD
Though I have to say, you're such a meanie for ending it right there! :P It's fitting, but I couldn't help but want to read more. Vanitas was - what a surprise - perfect in this one-shot. The things he said and did, even the frustration because of the unknown caller, it was all so Vanitas-like and highly entertaining. I do hope you'll write more, even if it's not a continuation.
Honestly, it doesn't matter what it's about, but whenever you write a one-shot, I'm always secretly hoping for a continuation. :P
| GuiltyKingOumaShu chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Ah, so nice to see a new story from you. It's always a pleasure to read your VanAqua stories. If there is anything I would have to criticize, it would be the fact that it was so damn short. I always end up wishing that there was more.
Please keep up the good work. Sorry for the short review, btw. I am a psp reader and typing with that thing is a pain.