|Reviews for Curiosity Took the Bait|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
It was great don't be shy
| SwampyGreenie chapter 1 . 1/19
Awe no need to be embarrassed. I used to feel that way too, that is until I found this site! xD
I love the bathtub scene! It was really hot! 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
don't be shy. it was good
| lizzie chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
you're great writing, I hope to read another fic soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Hot! XD Very adorable!
| ayaheartright chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I'm not a guy, but having something inserted into a urethra sounds more painful than hot. Other than that I really enjoyed everything.
| endel chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
So hot! With a sweet ending too! Love those brothers and this story!
| ulqui's-girl chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
| Slytherclaw12 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
That was really friggin hot. I'd do just about anything to be able to write smut like that o_o
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Wow, i think that it's really well written, Good Job!
oh and thank you for uploading /
| dramaq chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
That was PERFECT. Perfect amount of exposition. Anatomically correct. Realistic reactions. Hot as fuck. Perfect.
| grimmulqi202204 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Soo good I lived it
| AzucenaXshadows chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
welp that was hot a steamy lol
| NanaLoveChel chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Don't be nervous! Your story was really good and didn't have much weird in it beside incest, which don't mind if we're reading YukioxRin obviously! But seriously, don't be nervous, it was really good!
| GreyMoth chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Lol, I use to be embarrassed about writing smut too until I realized half the people on the website writes it as well.
Your characterizations were well done, I especially enjoyed Rin, though I was puzzled why Yukio would invite Rin to bathe with him when he was attracted to him. And a little hint for writing: try not to rush anything. You didnt do it very often, but there were some parts when it was obvious you were more concerned about getting the actions out of the way and moving on. Yeah, go ahead and call me out on that, but hey, we all need to be called out about something!
Well done, and keep up the writing!