|Reviews for Can't Buy Happiness|
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 33 . 9/2/2013
Well yes they certainly seem to be having a HEA..the kids are healthy and Bella's still in remission and they are very happily married. it just seemed a bit farfetched that she would bounce back so well after contracting a rare form of bone cancer. The premise of the story was great but without being overtly critical or flaming in any manner the angsty drama seemed a bit much and over the top, only in regards to her health cause the money stealing totally happens to the best of people. I am certainly no writer and am in awe of any who have the imagination and creativity to share. Thank you for sharing this story and I must say I really love your second story. I can see how much you've grown honing in on your storyline. Cheers! ;))
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 29 . 9/2/2013
I think the mild heart attack was just a bit over the top but Bella sure is strong and resilient. It's playing out like a soap opera with all her physical maladies on one hand but then she's fine on the other?
I'm kind of wondering if this is why there hasn't been a recent update. You are a good writer but sometimes the plot can get away and become a tad unrealistic even for the best writers. Look at Charlaine Harris...totally had to stop reading after she let me down on the Sookie/Eric HEA.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 27 . 9/2/2013
Can women even take cancer meds while pregnant? I'm glad they moved back to Seattle but I'm sad she didn't get to open her bookstore. I didn't realize Edward was just a resident I thought he was a bonifide staff doctor. He must be wealthy cause residents don't make squat till they get on staff. I know you mentioned this is HEA but it really seems bleak. But hey miracles happen everyday!
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 26 . 9/2/2013
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 25 . 9/2/2013
She has a rare form of bone cancer and is pregnant with triplets plus she has the bookshop being renovated. Wow, could things be anymore dire? It worries me about the genetic deficiencies that can be passed on to her offspring...all three! Now this makes it even more high risk...Wow...that's a bit much, I think. But this is the fanfic realm and I've read more far fetched plots that turn out just fine.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 24 . 9/2/2013
Geez that's not good...isn't that cancer rare as far as bone marrow types and I think it can be genetically transmitted to offspring. How will she do chemo if she's pregnant? I can only imagine how high risk this makes her pregnancy. I don't see the outlook being that positive as far as longterm survivability rates. Yikes!
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 21 . 9/2/2013
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 20 . 9/2/2013
Talk about revelations this chapter was slap full of 'em! So happy that E/B kissed and made up and are moving forward in a loving open relationship. I really am sorry that Bella got played but she was headed on a dangerous path and she should've seen some red flags as she was paying out quite a bit to keep up her "friends" company. Hopefully she will be more cautious and not as trusting or naive. I can't wait for James to go down and I hope Lauren gets her comeuppance as well. At least Jessica turned out to be a genuine friend.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 18 . 9/2/2013
I hate to say it but it serves Bella right for being so damned obstinate and naive. It's a hard lesson to learn but people will use others for money, fame and travel if given a chance.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 15 . 9/2/2013
Ahh my god she's like those amish girls on rumspringa..LOL
I hope she doesn't go too overboard and become LILO. I hope Alice and Esme can talk some sense into her.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 14 . 9/2/2013
Uh oh, Jessica is bad news and too bad for Bella she's so trusting. I just bet James will be making an appearance at the club too. Here come those inevitable bumps. I hope she doesn't fall prey to their salicious partying.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
Wow, what an exceptional graduation gift and at $6000 a month plus refurbishing costs, oh my! Things are moving along smoothly for Bella and Edward but I have a feeling the bumps will be presenting themselves soon enough.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
Wow, roommates...very nice. It makes sense though as his apartment is spacious enough and she's new to the city and basically alone. It will definitely help ease her transition from Forks to NY considerably having a strong, buff, sensual shoulder to lean on.
I certainly wouldn't turn down that offer! ;))
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
Ha, ha, ha what a ssswwweeettt chapter! Yeah Tanya for helping Edward make up his mind and snap out of those denial issues he had going on. Now the path is clear and he can woo Bella guilt free and whole heartedly.
Edward was really trying my patience being so stubbornly oblivious and farsighted to his real wants and needs and am glad Tanya could help rectify that situation! So...could this apartment be located...in his building, after all it is the same management company.
| Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
WTH? What is up with Edward? He's attracted to Bella, thinks about her quite a bit, is jealous of Jake and even flies across the country to support her yet he still tells Tanya he loves her and wants to work through their rough patch. Is he delusional? Dude, wake up. Can you have Jasper kick him? ;) I am so serious! Even his parents see the attraction he has for her yet he turns it on and off when Tanya calls. Some people call it confused I call it degenerate. he,he,he Talk about mixed signals! Edward you're killing me #%#%
Maybe he's not consciously doing it on purpose but he's literally sitting on the fence post. I hope Bella makes him work for it. He can't have it both ways. What sane girl wants a model snubbed in their face? I think I'd not be hanging out much with Edward and his love. I wish Bella did have a boyfriend. Makes the playing field more even. :D