|Reviews for Revival|
| Kayakazumi chapter 3 . 3/29
This story is bad .. their cant be a next avatar unless aang dIes so ur story is in a curate
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/13/2013
The idea was okay but the story was poorly written. I got confused during a lot of the scenes, I wasn't sure which characters were in each scene.
| penguin2012 chapter 21 . 3/20/2013
I really liked the story and can't wait to read the sequel!
| Luna chapter 21 . 1/6/2013
Read it in one blow! There's a sequel right? Awesome story!
| Anime1225 chapter 21 . 11/4/2012
Story done, up to the sequel! :D
| Velvet of Love chapter 18 . 11/1/2012
When is the sequel coming out? I love this story :D
| ForeverNicole chapter 21 . 10/6/2012
SOOO good omg i loved it so much please update soon
| Natasha chapter 21 . 10/5/2012
Update with the sequel PLEASE!
| Velvet of Love chapter 20 . 9/13/2012
Whoo hooo! Fast update, I loved this chapter :)
| Velvet of Love chapter 19 . 9/12/2012
Awesome chapter your writing has improved. Secondly definitely use the he/she point of view, and last make the chapter longer!
| Hello chapter 17 . 8/24/2012
I love your story, you need to update more. Jianguo's such an asswhole, but somehow I have the feeling that he's gonna get nice. Wouldn't it be awesome that in the end Jianguo will protect Meisha? Also, I wonder how your gonna make Meisha and Kenshin get together, it's almost impossible! Most. read. more.
| fishie chapter 17 . 8/23/2012
It's funny I love your story and your writing improves with evry chapter, I wonder if Meisha and Kenshin will ever get together...
| A fellow nerd chapter 17 . 8/13/2012
I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapters of this story, in my opinion it's one of the better one's out there. I hope kenshin and Meisha can become happy together :)
You're writing skill has definitely improved throughout the storyline, you can be proud of yourself, especially since this isn't you native language.
Keep up the good work
| Velvet of Love chapter 17 . 8/8/2012
You need to update more and your writing has improved.
Keep up the good work.
| Velvet of Love chapter 16 . 7/17/2012
Thanks for updating ;)
I hope your enjoying your vacation in Italy. Are you having fun?