|Reviews for In Memoriam|
| MrsMetta chapter 15 . 5/22
I recently spent two nights reading this fascinating story, going to bad at 6am both mornings so I thought the least I can to is to leave couple of words feedback to each chapters. It took me longer than I thought, not being native English speaker, but... Regarding the enormous amount of work and time and soul that you put into writing...
| MrsMetta chapter 14 . 5/22
'I am trying not to hide' Sherlock, do, or do not, there is no try. Epic fail this time.
| MrsMetta chapter 13 . 5/22
I think this is my favourite chapter.
'Snap, crackle, pop' :-) An how John needs more space and time to adjust and mend the two line of memories, the two personalities. 'Almost me was actual me.' I can relate.
And how he is just not able to lie to Sherlock. And what a blessing is it really, that Sh can trust him on that base. I don't think Sh can trust people easily otherwise.
| MrsMetta chapter 12 . 5/22
Two Holmeses 'Definitely bloody abnormal' :-)
"Work environment lot less pleasant' :-)
I cherish how this John does things slightly differently than old John, like going to the pub with Lestrade earlier, and losing his temper about Donovan here, I think these changes are for the good and could remain in his personality even after he regains his memories.
'I never left' Oh that is what we all need, don't we?
| MrsMetta chapter 11 . 5/22
'Sherlock - whispers John, the hard syllable dissolving into a long groan'
And then: Frozen, lost... :-(
'I tried to be him. For you'
Such an emotional rollercoaster...
| MrsMetta chapter 10 . 5/22
'Toast at 5 am' :-)
| MrsMetta chapter 9 . 5/22
'Puddle of darkness on the pavement' :-(
| MrsMetta chapter 8 . 5/22
'Got you again' :-)
| MrsMetta chapter 7 . 5/22
'Maybe he'll come anyway' - oh how he did...
| MrsMetta chapter 6 . 5/22
I appreciate how you write the niceties of the touching session(s). And John's first recalling of what he has gone through, especially how he needs to walk around that place of the floor, oooh...
| MrsMetta chapter 5 . 5/22
I like the first bigger glimpse of John's POV, and how Sherlock is practically reading his mind while he is typing :-)
| MrsMetta chapter 4 . 5/22
I like how you write Lestrade's reaction to Sherlock's return, down to tiny details like the 'breath after the stairs' and the 'missed the smart-ass'...
And I adore how music can be the first connection to John! And how Sherlock even has written a piece in his head about him.
| MrsMetta chapter 3 . 5/22
I like the deductions! Some people try to write Sherlock without them, but...
| MrsMetta chapter 2 . 5/22
I so like your Sherlock! IC, more vulnerable but it is understandable in the circumstances, but still very Sherlock.
'I brought you grapes, ate them'
The whole part about dust and skin and old version of John and emotions induced stupidity.
| MrsMetta chapter 1 . 5/22
I actually like your take on second POV, and think your Mycroft is spot on.
This part as well: 'I hardly recognise this man' - No - Objectivity - 'You hardly recognise'