Reviews for ScarTail: Book Of Apoltis
Princess Unikitty chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
very interesting story so far. do keep it up.
Dr Death DST chapter 11 . 6/4/2013
Had to get caught up on the last few chapters, nice to see you're still writing this story. I feel bad for Apoltis, he's definitely having a rough time. Hopefully something good will happen for him soon. Although having Scartail and Ra'tarnik as his friends is fortunate. Maybe he can having something more stable.
Dr Death DST chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
Another good chapter, i definitely would have been outta there after the spider incident. Interested to see where things go from here.
Dr Death DST chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Nice chapter and exciting. I'm doing my review by phone so it's hard to give an in depth review. Still seeing some grammar mistakes. You might want to find a beta reader. I've got one for my c&c fic. Hell, I'll even beta for you if you want. Either way you're still doing a good job.
Dr Death DST chapter 5 . 6/14/2012
When I imagine scar tail I keep picturing raptor Jesus. I think ratarnik might be my favorite character. Probably because I love cats, especially the sword wielding kind. Looking forward to the next chapter. Sorry my reviews aren't very wordy.
hooded mage chapter 5 . 6/7/2012
This is a very imaginative and extremely interesting story.

Your writing style is fine, but could do with some more description.

What you can improve is your wording and spelling. Some words are slightly out of context, but it doesn't take away from the story.

Repeatedly you spell ''lightning'' as ''lighting.'' Spell checkers won't pick up on that, so be careful, and I would say learn the word ''than,'' as you use ''then'' in its place.

Apart from those small things, I think this story is fantastic, so keep writing!
Silent Strike 'Scy chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
I've only played Skyrim but I know quite a bit about Oblivion. Play one and you want to go back and play the others, right? Anyways, I think this is great. I've seen some really crappy stories involving plot and grammar, spelling, being rushed, and this has none of those issues. I love how you are giving Scar-Tail a personality. They didn't do very much for him at all in the game. Plot is amazing. I've been hooked since Chap 1, I just normally don't review/comment unless I really have something to say. Anyways, keep up the good work and update soon! This is definitely one of the better stories I've read.
Dr Death DST chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
Excellent chapter. I'm a picky reader so for you to keep me interested in a story about a game i haven't played is pretty good. I noticed some typos in the chapter. Likely a case of your fingers not keeping up with your thoughts. Makes me want to go out and buy oblivion.
Dr Death DST chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Scar tail is definitly a bad ass character. Some words I got confused on but only because I haven't played the game. Nicely detailed and good flow. Look forward to reading the rest.