Reviews for Turning Page
Guest chapter 7 . 9/25
I think is a little unnecessary how important was to Edward that she never have sex with anyone else. Like, she didn’t remember, if she had sex with someone else, is something that he had to understand. Idk sounded sexist to me.
SapphireBlue2007 chapter 5 . 9/4
this story is making me emotional!
BellaTesoro chapter 22 . 1/10
lol, what is 'taking the piss' mean?
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BellaTesoro chapter 21 . 1/10
It was so unexpected to have another piece of drama right as everything seemed be become resolved. Glad Edward was ok and that Renee wasn't killed either.
BellaTesoro chapter 20 . 1/10
The whole reason Charlie 'just didn't like Edward' and that's why he kept her away from him? Doesn't seem to warrant all that went down with Charlie and Renee. So Renee is just going clear across the country be done with both her husband and daughter? What selfish parents Bella had. Well she's rid of them now it seems. A little foreboding it would seem with Edward driving Renee to get her flight and a bad feeling Bella has.
BellaTesoro chapter 19 . 1/10
Ok, the breaking up with Jacob was not at all how I expected these two characters to handle things. Sure I accepted Bella was too weak to do this alone, so Edward steps in to support her but instead he went off on Jacob needlessly. He lunged at his throat? Why? The man was trying to take in an unrealistic story about memory lost and suddenly found and along with it a husband to boot. Why be insensitive toward a man who seems to have innocently fallen for a woman, engaged and soon to be married and then gets the wind knocked out of him like this? And easy peasy he's like yeah ok yeah you're right Bella I'm sorry too? For what is HE sorry for? Anyway, it's done, she's free and again Mrs. Cullen, married, quite an adult and yet she's afraid of her father as it seems is Edward. Why? They haven't done anything illegal or wrong.
BellaTesoro chapter 18 . 1/10
"knickers" I always giggle because to we Americans, knickers are not romantic. To us they are old fashioned, long white underclothing from the colonial days. But there was nothing not romantic about Edward starting a fire and then making love to Bella by it. I do wonder why Edward's family have an open door invitation to come in without knocking first. Maybe things will change now that he has a wife again. I think Bella was very weak not to go see Jacob while she was right there in Forks. If she can't talk to the man, she really wasn't intimate enough with him to marry him.
BellaTesoro chapter 17 . 1/10
I think this Bella needs to wear a safety helmet at all times. Good thing we didn't have to wait for another lost memories...And I hope Edward is on top of getting the bookshelves braced.
BellaTesoro chapter 16 . 1/10
I'd thought that Bella told Edward how she felt last chapter, but I guess she was still holding out for some reason but alls well that ends well. Edward got his forever girl back and Bella finally made it crystal clear Mrs. Isabella Cullen is back. I'm curious about 'safe sex' as no talk of the need for condoms was discussed, so maybe those babies Edward planned for in that house are on their way. I still think the telling of Jacob is long overdue. I can't admire Bella for marrying him simply because he provided security as she stated, wrong reason to marry someone and not fair to him either.
BellaTesoro chapter 15 . 1/10
Loved this chapter. It's good that Bella is finding her memories so easily now and that she's surrounded by family.
BellaTesoro chapter 14 . 1/10
What a wimp Renee was and still is. Why isn't she sticking up for her daughter. How powerful can a chief of police be, not much. If he's abusive, that's another story. But we still don't know why Charlie now wouldn't want Bella with Edward. Edward is an upstanding doctor, he is her husband too so in the eyes of the law they are married. It just doesn't make sense. Charlie and Renee don't even know Bella is in a relationship. So how controlling could Charlie be in her life? So Renee thought that sneaking around and getting Jenks to serve Bella the papers that she is still married would stop the madness? Wouldn't a phone call to Edward or more importantly to her daughter have done that? I wonder if I should go and read the Edward outtakes before moving on.
BellaTesoro chapter 13 . 1/9
Ok, now I have to say I'm really annoyed with Bella. WTH? Jacob calls her, and I'm surprised he hasn't called before this since he is about to marry her and all...and when he does call, she's just about to put Edward out of his misery because he said he couldn't do this anymore knowing she might go back to her life and Jacob...when she really never even loved Jacob. It's unfair to Jacob to not be honest with him, she's wrong there no matter what struggles with her memory she's having. It's not like Jacob had anything to do with this. I suspected it was her parents that informed Jenks. How they, or Renee found out about the marriage since sneaky Bella didn't tell them...and just why did she keep it a secret and why would Jacob call her parents when apparently they don't know about him and or the wedding? It's just not making sense. But it is very dramatic to see where this all goes.
BellaTesoro chapter 12 . 1/9
Wow, Edward has all those albums chronicling their life together. Being surrounded by all those memories must have hurt so badly. It's like he's created a memory shrine for Bella, it's kind of, well, a little gothic. He's as broken over this right now as Bella is.
BellaTesoro chapter 11 . 1/9
I could feel Bella's feeling of the walls closing in when she came out of the restroom. And all she needed was some kisses. I hope this is what gets her more comfortable with her kaleidoscope of memories.
BellaTesoro chapter 10 . 1/9
I was a bit lost at first but quickly realized we were going out of present time. Edward was so innocently honorable and love struck. Like he said, a lot of people would think he was being a silly teenager, and he was really, but his love was pure as we see he's waiting all these long years for his one true love to come back to him. I don't know what Bella is missing when she 'wakes up' from being lost in the past, he's still right there feeling exactly like he always felt and she seems to be catching up.
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