Reviews for Turning Page
rfalc354 chapter 21 . 10/13/2023
Oh come on!
rfalc354 chapter 20 . 10/13/2023
This travel round and round is not well thought out. From Dorks to Seattle is about 3 hrs 1 way. Edward and Bella went to Seattle and spent time oacking and meeting with Jacob then drive 3 hra back to Forks in the rain. By now it must be about 5 pm and he punched Charlie’s lights out. He has got to be tired since this is all human. Renee could have stayed overnight and traveled to Boston the next day. By the time Edward returns he will either be drop down tired his return will be around midnight or very early the next morning.

I like the story but some things beed to make sense
rfalc354 chapter 12 . 10/13/2023
Arent they sitting in their wwt clothes? Bella has git to be uncomfortable.
agoodmother401 chapter 7 . 4/30/2023
Although nothing like this happened to me when I started reading this story it made me remember what it was like after I had woken up up from a head injury. Years later after I had recovered my mother still protecting me tried to run off any guys that got to close. I didn't care after I met the 2nd guy I dated I left home and got pregnant and then we got married.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2022
How come her parents didn't know that makes no sense. Unless she didn't give a deal enough about her parents to tell them.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/25/2021
I think is a little unnecessary how important was to Edward that she never have sex with anyone else. Like, she didn’t remember, if she had sex with someone else, is something that he had to understand. Idk sounded sexist to me.
SapphireBlue2007 chapter 5 . 9/4/2021
this story is making me emotional!
BellaTesoro chapter 22 . 1/10/2021
lol, what is 'taking the piss' mean?
This was a lovely ending to a good story. I left you reviews after each chapter to say thank you for sharing your work and keeping it here so we can enjoy it.
I hope you and yours are safe and well and that you come back and write more wonderful stories.
BellaTesoro chapter 21 . 1/10/2021
It was so unexpected to have another piece of drama right as everything seemed be become resolved. Glad Edward was ok and that Renee wasn't killed either.
BellaTesoro chapter 20 . 1/10/2021
The whole reason Charlie 'just didn't like Edward' and that's why he kept her away from him? Doesn't seem to warrant all that went down with Charlie and Renee. So Renee is just going clear across the country be done with both her husband and daughter? What selfish parents Bella had. Well she's rid of them now it seems. A little foreboding it would seem with Edward driving Renee to get her flight and a bad feeling Bella has.
BellaTesoro chapter 19 . 1/10/2021
Ok, the breaking up with Jacob was not at all how I expected these two characters to handle things. Sure I accepted Bella was too weak to do this alone, so Edward steps in to support her but instead he went off on Jacob needlessly. He lunged at his throat? Why? The man was trying to take in an unrealistic story about memory lost and suddenly found and along with it a husband to boot. Why be insensitive toward a man who seems to have innocently fallen for a woman, engaged and soon to be married and then gets the wind knocked out of him like this? And easy peasy he's like yeah ok yeah you're right Bella I'm sorry too? For what is HE sorry for? Anyway, it's done, she's free and again Mrs. Cullen, married, quite an adult and yet she's afraid of her father as it seems is Edward. Why? They haven't done anything illegal or wrong.
BellaTesoro chapter 18 . 1/10/2021
"knickers" I always giggle because to we Americans, knickers are not romantic. To us they are old fashioned, long white underclothing from the colonial days. But there was nothing not romantic about Edward starting a fire and then making love to Bella by it. I do wonder why Edward's family have an open door invitation to come in without knocking first. Maybe things will change now that he has a wife again. I think Bella was very weak not to go see Jacob while she was right there in Forks. If she can't talk to the man, she really wasn't intimate enough with him to marry him.
BellaTesoro chapter 17 . 1/10/2021
I think this Bella needs to wear a safety helmet at all times. Good thing we didn't have to wait for another lost memories...And I hope Edward is on top of getting the bookshelves braced.
BellaTesoro chapter 16 . 1/10/2021
I'd thought that Bella told Edward how she felt last chapter, but I guess she was still holding out for some reason but alls well that ends well. Edward got his forever girl back and Bella finally made it crystal clear Mrs. Isabella Cullen is back. I'm curious about 'safe sex' as no talk of the need for condoms was discussed, so maybe those babies Edward planned for in that house are on their way. I still think the telling of Jacob is long overdue. I can't admire Bella for marrying him simply because he provided security as she stated, wrong reason to marry someone and not fair to him either.
BellaTesoro chapter 15 . 1/10/2021
Loved this chapter. It's good that Bella is finding her memories so easily now and that she's surrounded by family.
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