Reviews for Alternate Timeline
leep23029 chapter 1 . 6/24
Hah alternate Naruto falls in to cannon Naruto time line. Well minus the illusion test thing and you get an almost perfect Kishimoto version.
NarutosBrat chapter 10 . 6/21
Somehow, I'm not surprised that Naruto banged Hana. It's such a cliche staple of Naruto harem/ladies man fics that Naruto bangs either Tsume or Hana, Kiba finds out, and Kiba has a hilariously over the top reaction. Not even surprised that Tsume knows and approves, and for some reason, I could even believe that she'd video tape it.
NarutosBrat chapter 9 . 6/21
Yeah, I hate it too, but the good thing about this being a parody fanfic, is that you can fourth wall in some real rap lessons for him, so that he can actually spit hot rhymes, and the rapping you hate can be his way of fucking with people because he knows it bothers them.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/21
Why, oh why did you kill Haku?
Reain chapter 23 . 6/9
I literally can't breath well after reading this. Too funny dude, and actually really fucking creative!
DarkElucidator chapter 23 . 6/3
...I finish the fic.
DarkElucidator chapter 19 . 6/3
I don't always review, but when I do...
DannyPhantom619 chapter 23 . 5/24
Damn, that was funny
SageModeSasuke chapter 14 . 4/27
This is nuts.
SageModeSasuke chapter 9 . 4/27
Then write Bee with Better Lyrics. Lol
SageModeSasuke chapter 7 . 4/27
Fuu is kind of cool I guess.
SageModeSasuke chapter 6 . 4/27
Not bad.
SageModeSasuke chapter 5 . 4/27
Shaking my head at the madness.
SageModeSasuke chapter 4 . 4/27
Is Naruto, or the sandaime (Third) related to Deadpool?
SageModeSasuke chapter 3 . 4/27
I am having the time of my month (rather than life) with this story. Well done.
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