|Reviews for A Required Patience|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24
this is amazing
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/16
you must be that pervert in the white van that steals children to rape them. are you gay? and why did you have to write this creepy weird s**t about my beautiful son and his adopted oaf brother. seriously. you mortals are so weird. you must have a small mind. and a giant dictionary. how about i find where you live and give my tail blade your neck? the people who read this rather...sexually pleasing fanfiction must also be perverted white van drivers.
| Bleach1112 chapter 13 . 12/26/2014
I love this story! It's everything I want in a Thorki fanfiction wrapped in one!
| KisaWolfz chapter 13 . 6/11/2014
I loved it truly. The characters were built and portrayed beautifully. The relation was such push and pull, it hurt sometimes. I feel this is how each of the characters WOULD be. If only Odin was as kind as he was portrayed here, then from the movies/stories.
Anyways, I would recommend this fic, to all 'Thor/Loki' shippers. 10/10 would recommend.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
I found your story yesterday and I truly loved it. Thank you for not letting anyone be raped and showing a loving Odin that does not appear in Canon or Norse legend. I wish Odin had loved Loki that deeply and really apologized to him. I will look forward to reading more Loki stories in the future from you.
| Sumi Anzu chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
The msystery to why thor feeel terrible in morning, a dull pain on his face.
"I had to punch you in the jaw to cease the cacophonous sounds."
Lol mystery solved, loki punch thor to stop him from snoring so he can sleep in peace.
Btw, i like how loki describe of what he see when he reach down and in to the prison.
The smell, physical implication of pain, and then to defilment.
Yes, i find it strange that the guard still hard enough or arouse enough to defile them with scent of old blood, urine and feces in the air ( problably sight of themm too)
Hey, probably that what flow the ship for fargo and some of the guard.
Still, they should have a clean room and wash the prisoners before the sexual violation
For prevention of worker's injuries and hardazd ( avoid infection and spread of disease)
Then again, maybe it doesnt matter unlike we human, they are asgardian so maybe they dont get sick like we do. But still wash that arse and pen.
| Sumi Anzu chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
This is good. Smack-talking loki acting like he is in control, being all cocky stoking thor thigh and assume thar thor want to defile him,deep inside he fear for that.
| sciphy chapter 13 . 2/8/2014
AWWWW! Thank you for this.
| Mizra67 chapter 13 . 1/29/2014
Although I may not be a thorki huge fan, I must say, this fan fic, was truly one of the best I have ever read, amazing and the passion and positives and negatives, you arranged them so we like a true author, which you are. (applause) I would truly love another sequel, hope you never stop, this fan fic may be old but I'll keep reading it. :)
| Nienna Perks chapter 13 . 1/11/2014
I love this! I first read it maybe a month ago but I couldn't help but read it again. I love how you use a common enemy to reunite them and allow Loki to prove himself. I love that you take Odin being a complete bastard and even use that to show the similarities between him and Loki, instead of Loki just being an outcast.
The way you build on Thor & Loki's relationship is beautiful, always that push and pull. I love how Thor surprises Loki by not giving in straight away and how they both get manipulated by each other and those around them, it kept it interesting. And the Thorki loving was hot as Hel! P
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
Oh my goodness, I luuuuuuuvd this story! What an exciting ride. And the happy ending was wonderful. Thanks so much for posting it :)
| Arekkusu Naitofaia chapter 13 . 11/11/2013
Wow, I really enjoyed this. If Loki was going to be changed to somewhat good this is definitely a believable way of it happening. Still I have to admit I preferred the first half of this fic, ok let me get to the constructiveness. Loki was near flawlessly in character to me, especially for the first half but I understand he needed to change to fit the story and still he was wonderfully written there too. Thor again was well done so good job! In general this fic was beautifully written (except for the occasional spelling mistake particularly with names) with a very good vocabulary. I love Loki's manipulative scheme - awesome. A few things that I didn't like as much which I suppose could be seen as personal preference was the idea of Loki topping Thor and Thor being that submissive in bed - I see why you did it but I personally don't think it would really go that way and also I think after the half way mark you put in too much sex, funny to complain about that but I find stories that have a brilliant start and afterwards just write a load of pointless porn and it just kills the story. Sadly I did find that this contained too much of that, I mean I get that they would indeed fuck but seriously that was nearly all that happened for most of the later chapters that it lost it's specialness as for the first half the sexual tension was absolutely thrilling. Still nonetheless there was some hilarious dialogue, you justified Loki amazingly well and had a decent plot, good on you for making the asshole Odin actually do what he should have done in the first place in your fic - apologize to Loki.
Anywho I hope the sorta criticism wasn't mean, I really hope not because this was still one of the best ThorKi fics I've read :)
| Moonmistninja chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Are you considering a sequel? Like Thor bringing Loki back to earth to meet the avengers or anything like that? I'm not so her how it would work ruling Asgard and all but if you ever make a sequel TELLL MEEE!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Please do more thor/loki! This is amazing!#
| hero-madness123 chapter 13 . 5/4/2013
Amazing I love this story! It was all so well planned out just wow! Amazing