|Reviews for Survival in Theater|
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/1/2013
not 5 star material but it was pretty good :)
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
Cute epilogue, love it.
This was a great story! It was fun to read and suspenseful, awesome job!
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 8 . 6/14/2012
I liked this story! However, you did say at the beginning that Mimi dies, which confuses me, but whatever. LARLARLAR
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
Aw, this was sweet!
Good job on the characters. Can't wait for more!
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 6 . 5/26/2012
Wow...lots of dead people.
The thing is, nobody seems to be in shock or effected by their friends dying and them being in a haunted house. We don't really feel for the characters yet, and they don't seem to care a whole bunch about their friends. So just work on personalities and this would be more awesome than it already is!
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 5 . 5/14/2012
Human Heart! That's one of my favorite songs (my favorite being "mama will provide" because I GOT TO SING IT IN MY PRODUCTION!)
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 4 . 5/9/2012
Well, there goes a storyteller...
Big improvements from the last chapter! Keep up the good work!
| littlered23 chapter 3 . 5/9/2012
It needs more detail! and dont start the haunting right away, you want you readers to fall in love with the charaters. An d if you add a authers note make it bold its alot easier to know when i story stops and when your talking begins! You have a great idea just needs alot more details :) good luck
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 3 . 5/2/2012
It was good, but it lacked detail. Describe the building more! For all we know it could have hot pink walls with unicorns on them and "Dinosaur" could be playing in the background the entire time!
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
Can't wait to read this! Update soon please!
| Revenge and Rainbows chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Are these your actual friends or made up characters?