Honestly, I wasnt a big fan of this, Harry spends the entire story as a powerless victim...

July 31st you had to do it on that day!

I loved the entire fic, I would love more especially once he comes back.

thank you

Hi!
This is a really good and interesting story. I enjoyed reading very much. You did great at writing. Very well done.
You managed to find a perfect balance for the plot between the case and romance, as well as not overdoing the magical draw between Harrison and Derek.
Hermione really isn't a popular person in this story. It's good that Harrison got supported instead by the Royal family.
I would be happy to read about how things will work out for Harrison and Derek, but I also understand that this is a good ending point for the story.

Loved it! Not a fan of the ending, but it wasn’t awful. I would have like to see more after he came back.. but still a very good story.. had me on edge the whole time

Great story! Interesting plot, well written. Love the pairing of Harry/Derek. What a bittersweet ending (still loved it). 3333

Thanks for a great read! This was very nicely done.

! Something caught your tongue? ;)

Damn the last part just...

You're so cruel for ending it like that!
I want a sequel with a happy ending for Harry and Derek and maybe some Mpreg
Then for the BAU to remember about magic

That was seat grippingly awesome

Fantastic story. and the pairing is great, too.
I'd really love a sequel, where they develop their relationship and maybe Derek will get to know about magic again.
cheers
Maya

A sombre and somewhat angsty read but good nonetheless. I’m dreaming that they eventually reconnect and get their HEA.

As much as I loved this story. And I truly did. The ending has me choked up. I understand the need. It was very realistic and very well thought out... Just ugh . The ending. I like me some happy ending... Lovely work though.

Amazing!