|Reviews for Rebound|
| PumaGoddess chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Very well written lemon! The details were amazing. I think the parts about naruto were a bit unnecessary and a touch dark for smut, maybe something about being late for work in a few hours would be more lighthearted.
| The Critique chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
One of the Best lemons ever.
I really enjoyed reading this Fic.
This is my first ever GenmaxSakura I've ever read.
Thank you for not ruining this pairing for me :p
Keep writing because your definitely one of the more talented writers on this site.
Keep up the good work! :D
| sakurablossom1694 chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Aww such a cute pairing :) The lemon was perfect, too ;)
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I love it and their pairing is a cute one but the ending, I guess didn't leave me satisfied.
| Mina Monster chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Must... Not... Read... AGAIN!
Anyway, what does 'Hana' mean?
| st0rmy knight chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Great quick read. There was nothing I disliked about this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
| bella chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
i like this paring
| Crimson Siyrean chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
incredibly hot and well written. Loved the banter, I think this is one of the best lemon's I've ever read, and man have I read a LOT. too many lemons are all passion, they forget the playfulness. This hits the balance just right.
| LolaSenpai chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Really love this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
| Fenrir Brossolette chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Oh I will tell you what, this lemon was amazing. I know nothing about Genma, except that he really isn’t in Naruto too much, but I like what you did with him. I was unable to contain my happiness through the end of this story, which is maybe the biggest accolade that I can give it. I feel bad for Sakura, but I think that this mistake will be good for her, because sometimes you have to fuck that wrong person to know who the right person is. I hope that you include a lot of what goes on in here in your other story Opheliac. As for the sex, hot, very hot, I loved the teasing, it really hit the spot and I really liked the banter and back and forth between them. I won’t tell all in a review, but I really liked your description of certain acts and even certain funny failures, cough, losing strength in her arms, cough. I look forward to more one shots from you, keep the arousals coming, lol. Oh, however you get your ideas for stuff like this keep doing that, like me for instance, my best friend keeps me looking at new things and wondering about how other things would feel, not the most experienced person sexually that I know, but what makes said friend special is the fact that this person is open to just about anything and with a mind like that, well, let’s just say it can keep the blood and ideas flowing. If you have someone like that, a boyfriend or friend or whoever, keep them close. ;)
| Iroka chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Ah, I have such a hard time reviewing stories I found perfect. Why? I have no idea. All I can muster in my head is "I love it!" over and over. That is a fair warning I give all stories I find flawless. Which is very, very rare.
Absolutely fantastic lemon! It was so perfect. A great balance between reality and fantasy. Pretty much the type of steamy intimate encounter we all fantasize about. But with you never straying too far from reality made it all the better. I cringe at obvious virgins who say the silliest things in their lemons. They are hard to connect to. I'm not sure how to praise this lemon without sounding like a pervert. LOL It was spectacular. Enough said.
You requested comments on anything and I'll try to cover the rest. Grammar/spelling perfect. I spotted one typo near the end but hardly worth a fuss. Great writing as well. I myself have never written a lemon so I can't comment on first-hand experience, but you did a fine job always keeping the reader in-the-know. There were some parts I got a little confused of the position but that could have been very much my own fault. Perhaps I read too fast.
The hints of her relationship with Naruto were nice. I think it would have been perfect to reflect on it at certain points. Like when she realized she had no idea why she wanted to leave the bar. I believe she could have come to the realization that she was just looking for some intimate company? An older man to make her feel like a woman? Wanting a more dominant man? LOL I didn't quite get the feel of her feelings towards Naruto. She seemed empty about it at some points but at the end didn't as much. Not critique at all, just me rambling on about the story. This IS GenSaku so I can't complain too much. If you did my suggestions it could have very well taken away from the story if done too much. So pay me no mind. haha
Really, great one-shot! Going on my favs. I love Genma and I have been a GenSaku fan since before Shippuden!
| The Seldom Seen Kid chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
This was awesome! I love how you made this as a little side story. I can't wait for your next update on "Opheliac".