Reviews for Who You Are
xXxSkyLifexXx chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
I can't say I didn't expect it. It was towards the end of chapter two that I figured out her name, actually. In chapter one, when she flinched at Kaoru's name, I though something happened between them, or that he did something, but it turned out it was all just about the name.

A good plot for what it was, and I liked it a lot :)
LeoniaOtaku chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
cool Story! :D
StartingAtTheEnd chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
D'aww. This was so sweet. I loved that Raika's name was actually Kaoru. That was just amazing and I didn't really expect it either. :) Good work
Rikuo Hana chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
HAHA this was really funny that i was laughing hard in the floor then everyone thought i was already a mental though i always have a pea-brain nyahahahaha!
KodokunaRisu chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
It was soooooo adorable .
Animedragon88 chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
This is friggen hilarus and sweet!
lovefairytail007 chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
i really like this story its really cute! Hikaru is the best!
Lady Island Rose chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
The only bad thing about this was that it ended! I loved this, so cute and detailed and in character! You are a brilliant writer my friend!
Lady Island Rose chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
Hahaha oh Tama-chan, your dead. Deader than a doornail. Deader than a . . . dead person? LOL anyways! I love this! So much!
Lady Island Rose chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Hahahaha poor Raika. Well thats what happens when your friends with Tama-chan!
AnimewithFood chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Omg this story is so cool! What? Only seven reviewz? U should have like 53! Here this review makes it 8 in total ;) hope this one tiny review made u smile! :)
Eos Raidekin chapter 3 . 5/5/2012
yay! I loved the ending to this 3 shot!:)I knew that Hikaru and Kaoru's names were both unisex but I didn't catch on until she responded to it lol

You are a great writer and I am looking forward to reading more of your writings LKHKKR buddy:)
akkichan1 chapter 3 . 5/5/2012
Awwwww! Thats so sweet! I loved it! And the whole having the same name as kaoru... TRUE GENIUS! And lol at Tamakis many fails XD i really like yout stories! An hope you will continue to put more out! Especially your D Gray man one :DD 3
Silvix chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
I think I figured out Raika's real name~!

I like the story, it has a good plot~!
EowynAhsokaLover chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Please keep in mind that this review is only after I've finished the first chapter.

First off, you're a pretty decent writer. There were a few unwieldy sentences and few slightly off prepositions, but overall you're writing is pretty good.

However, this chapter does have several cliches. I would advise you change the description of her hair as "midnight" because flowery descriptions ae looked on often as cliche. Also, having her related to both haruhi and kyoya is a little unlikely, but if their relatipn is entwined with a brilliant plot, I'm not one to criticize.
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