Reviews for Five
HecateA fan chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
I have officially hopped on the Divergent train! WOOHOO! ( Mom nearly died when she found out I finished the first book in 4 hours! ) And Four being Tobias? Totally called it after he said he didn't do aptitude tests for the Abnegation and when Tris' mom recognized him at Visiting Day. Loved the fanfiction!
By the way, what faction would you guys choose, I like the Amity faction a lot, but the Abnegation cannot be ignored!
Not Just A Reader - A Fangirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Whoa. That is intense.
Asradiantasthesun chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
This story is just flawless. This is the thing that has been stuck in my mind since I read Divergent- what about Fourtris fears of loosing each other?
Mayhaah chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Hehehe
I am that Writer chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
How cool! And you successfully wrote Tobias’s awesome character correctly! :)
Wonderstruck Pen chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
You've written Four perfectly!
Or should I say Five?
:D
-Pen
cuteypuffgirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
That was beautifully-written and well-fleshed out. I especially loved the ending, about his five fears.
I think you captured Tobias's emotions almost perfectly with this. Heartbreaking yet thought-provoking, well done!

xx cuteypuffgirl
lady2923 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Aw!
Slytherin Sadist Angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Great fic, and pretty much what I was expecting from Four. I read Insurgent- it's so freaking GOOD.
gege109 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Really good story! I love Divergent, but sadly have to wait for the next book from the library.. :( This is really good, you should write more fanfiction for Divergent! :D
Uncanny Cantaloupe chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I had this idea too but I never acted on it XD

INSURGENT IS OUT IT'S SO GOOD!
TobiasWillJaceFinnickFourNine chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
This was so so so good :).
Gloria chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Awwwwww. Very good.