Reviews for Just tell me when you hear my heart stop
suzieQ21 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
describes it perfectly rach ;)
N7angel chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
That practically brought tears to my eyes. Short, sad, and very well written. You should write more like this 'cause you're good at it :)
Spooky Sundae chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This is utterly and essentially the definition of awesome! Honestly, you captured Sara's thoughts and feelings so well in here, and I can totally imagine this was exactly what was going through her mind in that moment. Also, the lyrics were perfectly timed; all in all, a very clever and original idea, and I'd love to see more of these kind of stories from you! (:
jetplanejane chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I really think you should write more in this style. Your writing's improved 110% since I started reading. And this story is sad but beautiful. Keep it up!